Hi Gemmar

2022-09-01 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

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ESSAY: In many situations, people who break the law should be warned instead of punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Gemma~~ You give me the same essay topic .hahahaha I wrote a few weeks ago.( you don\'t remember TT) Anyway, I was so glad to hear your voice again today. For three days, I felt little uncomportable in the class with new teacher. Because I have to tell her about me again and also I have to have time to know her again. hihihi Althoug we are a student and a teacher, It takes time to be comport each other, doesn\'t it? See you !!!

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [이름]! It was great to hear you again! I hope I could also travel one of these days. It\'s sometimes overwhelming to escape from this world of mine. Hahaha! I\'m sorry for giving you the same topic. I didn\'t notice. Don\'t worry, I have 200+ questions ready for you. Hahaha! Since you\'ve been to Saipan and have met a lot of new people, here\'s my question to you, have you ever experienced culture shock? What do people from other countries typically think about your culture?

>>> TEACHER GEMMA

You give me the same essay topic .hahahaha

>> I\'M SO SORRY
I wrote a few weeks ago.( you don\'t remember TT)

>> CORRECT
Anyway, I was so glad to hear your voice again today.

>> CORRECT
For three days, I felt little uncomportable in the class with new teacher.

>>> For three days, I felt a little uncomfortable in class with the new teacher.
Because I have to tell her about me again and also I have to have time to know her again. hihihi

>> CORRECT! Hahaha!
Althoug we are a student and a teacher, It takes time to be comport each other, doesn\'t it?
>>> Although we are a student and a teacher, it takes time to be comfortable with each other, isn\'t it?
See you !!!

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