Hi Gemmar

2022-09-13 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

학생이 쓴 원문

Gemma ~~ Today is my husband\'s birthday. I forgot it totally until this morning. When I checked my schedule in this morning, I knew it. I don\'t prepare anything for his present ,, I don\'t have time to go out afternoon what I have to do? TTT I am just writting congratulations on a small card. I become older, I miss many things like this. I feel so sad to me and sad to my husband who has a mindless wife. Well, I had better to reserve a nice restaurant for dinner and pretend to waiting for birthday dinner with him.

강사 첨삭

Hi again Ms. [이름]! ^^ Hahaha

>>> TEACHER GEMMA

Gemma ~~
Today is my husband\'s birthday.

>>> CORRECT (SOUNDS GREAT!)
I forgot it totally until this morning.

>>> CORRECT (SOUNDS SAD! :( )
When I checked my schedule this morning, I knew it.

>>> CORRECT
I don\'t prepare anything for his present ,,

>>> I didn\'t prepare anything for his present. (YES, I\'M WAITING FOR MINE TOO HAHAHA! )
I don\'t have time to go out afternoon what I have to do? TTT

>>> I don\'t have time to go out this afternoon what should I do?
I am just writing congratulations on a small card.

>>> CORRECT
I become older, I miss many things like this.

>>> CORRECT
I feel so sad to me and sad to my husband who has a mindless wife.

>>> I feel so sad for myself and to my husband who has forgetful wife.
Well, I had better to reserve a nice restaurant for dinner and pretend to waiting for birthday dinner with him.

>>> Well, I had better reserve a nice restaurant for dinner and pretend to wait for birthday dinner with him. ( THIS IS A GOOD IDEA! HAHAHA PRETENDING NOT FORGETTING HIS BIRTHDAY BUT TRYING TO SURPRISE HIM ) HAHAHA

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