Hi Gemmar
학생이 쓴 원문
Last Saturday, I went to a dog cafeteria with Nana and my husband.
They sell beverage and some snacks and give a place which dogs can play.
We have to pay dog\'s entrance fee and have to order drinks or some snacks.
We visited a dog cafe long time ago just once.
As I remembered, Nana didn\'t like playing with other dogs even worse she scared other dogs.
But she really enjoyed this time. she played catching a ball with me and ate delicious pet food.
But still She doesn\'t like other dogs. She ran away when other dogs came to her and tried to smell her.
I think she thinks she is human like me. hihihihi
I am going to go there again soon because Nana slept well that day with tiredness. hahhaha
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [이름]! ^^ Honestly, I don\'t have anything to share as far as petting is concerned. Hahaha! The last time I took care of a dog was when I was in grade school. Since it was my first pet... and also the last actually... Hahaha! I was very excited to take care of Rio, the name of my dog. Every time I came home after school, I used to look for Rio and play with him. One afternoon, I was excited to go home and play with Rio. I was saddened when I couldn\'t find him at home. My mom saw me and told me that my dad and his friends killed and ate Rio. I was so upset that I didn\'t talk to my dad about a month. Hahaha! After which, I\'ve decided not to have pets anymore. ;(
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Last Saturday, I went to a dog cafeteria with Nana and my husband.
>>> CORRECT
They sell beverage and some snacks and give a place which dogs can play.
They sell beverage and some snacks and give a place which dogs can play.
>>> They sell beverages and some snacks and provide a place where dogs can play.
We have to pay for the dog\'s entrance fee and have to order drinks or some snacks.
We have to pay for the dog\'s entrance fee and have to order drinks or some snacks.
>>> CORRECT
We visited a dog cafe long time ago just once.
We visited a dog cafe long time ago just once.
>>> CORRECT
As I remembered, Nana didn\'t like playing with other dogs even worse she scared other dogs.
But she really enjoyed this time. she played catching a ball with me and ate delicious pet food.
As I remembered, Nana didn\'t like playing with other dogs even worse she scared other dogs.
But she really enjoyed this time. she played catching a ball with me and ate delicious pet food.
>>> CORRECT
But still she doesn\'t like other dogs.
But still she doesn\'t like other dogs.
>>> CORRECT
She ran away when other dogs came to her and tried to smell her.
>>> CORRECT
I think she thinks she is human like me. hihihihi
I think she thinks she is human like me. hihihihi
>>> CORRECT
I am going to go there again soon because Nana slept well that day with tiredness. hahhaha
I am going to go there again soon because Nana slept well that day with tiredness. hahhaha
>>> CORRECT
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