Hi Gemmar

2022-09-26 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

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ESSAY: More and more people are finding it increasingly important to wear fashionable clothes. Is this attitude to wearing clothes a positive development or negative? To me, It is a positive development that people are getting to wear fashionable clothes. Because when I meet someone, I naturally check his/her sense of fashion without my will. Some people say, Complietion of fashion is face ( handsome and beautiful face). But I cannot ignore their fashion style even though he/she has beautiful face. I love clothes and shoes. and I have lots of clothes and shoes. More than 70% of my house clothes are mine. But I always say to my husband, \' I have no clothes to wear \' hahahha

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [이름]! It was great to have read your essay! ;) Anyway, I ain\'t fashionista but my friends said I have a good sense of color combination. They said I have a good taste of which color to fit my skin. Hahaha!

>>> TEACHER GEMMA

To me, It is a positive development that people are getting to wear fashionable clothes.

>>>CORRECT
Because when I meet someone, I naturally check his/her sense of fashion without my will.

>>>CORRECT
Some people say, completion of fashion is face ( handsome and beautiful face).

>>>CORRECT
But I cannot ignore their fashion style even though he/she has beautiful face.

>>>CORRECT
I love clothes and shoes and I have lots of clothes and shoes.

>>>CORRECT
More than 70% of my house clothes are mine.

>>>CORRECT
But I always say to my husband, I have no clothes to wear \' hahahha

>>>CORRECT ( I GUESS WOMEN ARE THE SAME HAHAHA, 3/4 OF OUR WARDROBE CONTAINS MY STUFF. SO MY HUSBAND JUST SIGH WHENEVER I PREPARE CLOTHES FOR MY OOTD. (OUTFIT OF THE DAY )

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