HI~GINA!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi~Gina! I\'m jisuk. My English name is [이름]. Please call me \"[이름]\" ^^
Last Class, I missed the this. Because the day was my birthday. I forgot my class in Tuesday even I applied for the class before just one day.... So, I am very sorry to you.
Today, I\'ll have a dinner my co-workers at 7 pm. Lately, the gorverment\'rule changed to allow only upto 4 members gathering because COVID-19. Of cause, I asked for permission to my boss for this a private gathering before.
Anyway, I need to get ready for my work. See you later.!
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
It was nice knowing this from you.
Thank you for sending me a message.
Belated Happy Birthday as well. ^^
You don\'t have to worry about last Tuesday, it\'s okay.
I hope that you were able to spend it wonderfully as you celebrated your birthday. ^^
Enjoy the dinner with your co-workers as well.
I hope that you\'ll have a nice dinner with them. ^^
Take care and see you later!
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
Last Class, I missed the this. Because the day was my birthday.
Last Class, I missed the this. Because the day was my birthday.
>> Last class time, I missed it because that day was my birthday.
I forgot my class in Tuesday even I applied for the class before just one day....
>> I forgot my class on Tuesday even if I applied for the class just one day before it.
So, I am very sorry to you.
>> CORRECT.
Today, I\'ll have a dinner my co-workers at 7 pm.
Today, I\'ll have a dinner my co-workers at 7 pm.
>> Today, I\'ll have dinner with my co-workers at 7 pm.
Lately, the gorverment\'rule changed to allow only upto 4 members gathering because COVID-19.
>> Lately, the government\'s rule changed to allow only up to 4 members for a gathering because of COVID-19.
Of cause, I asked for permission to my boss for this a private gathering before.
>> Of course, I asked for a permission from my boss before for this private gathering.
Anyway, I need to get ready for my work. See you later.!
>> Of course, I asked for a permission from my boss before for this private gathering.
Anyway, I need to get ready for my work. See you later.!
>> CORRECT.
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