hi Giselle

2013-06-03 · 첨삭 강사 Giselle

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I am [이름]. I am happy to meet good teacher. Your laughing makes me relex. frankly, I have some uncomfortable when i am talking with english. Your smile is good pills for me. lets go back to my homework. Of course, i want to improve what i think i dont have. Now, above of all, i try to improving physical ability, It is included making a good body shape. Why? As long as body shape looks good, confidence also is getting bigger, i think. Maybe, real reason of making a good body shape is to get the confidence. but it dose not mean that i am coward. just i want to improve my confidence and remove my comflex. I hope that i will be very bright, comfortable, having a smile and easy-going person.

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Happy Monday [이름]!Thank you for sending your composition.^^ I really appreciate your taking time to share your thoughts. We do have hopes and we must try hard to reach them. I pray that you will reach your goals someday. Keep that confidence to a high level and be not afraid to face challenges. I will see you in class later. ~ T. Giselle ^^   I am [이름]. >> Correct. >> This is [이름]. I am happy to meet good teacher. >> I am happy to meet a good teacher like you. Your laughing makes me relex. >> Your laugh makes me feel relaxed. frankly, I have some uncomfortable when i am talking with english. >> Frankly, I feel comfortable when I speak in English. Your smile is good pills for me. >> Your smile is a good pill for me.lets go back to my homework. >> Correct. Of course, i want to improve what i think i dont have. >> Of course, I want to improve those things that I think I still don\'t have. Now, above of all, i try to improving physical ability, It is included making a good body shape. >> Now, above all, I will try to improve my physical ability. This includes having a good body shape. Why? As long as body shape looks good, confidence also is getting bigger, i think. >> Why? I think having a good body shapes also boosts up my confidence. Maybe, real reason of making a good body shape is to get the confidence. >> Maybe the real reason why I want to have a good bosy shape is to be more confident. but it dose not mean that i am coward. >> But it does not mean that I am a coward. just i want to improve my confidence and remove my comflex. >> I just want to gain more confidence and remove my complexities. I hope that i will be very bright, comfortable, having a smile and easy-going person. >> I hope that I become a very bright, comfortable, smiling/happy, and an easy-going person.  

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