Hi ~ Giselle ^^ : Please check up my homework .(20121214)

Hello T. Giselle !! Christmas Season makes people feel so good. Just word " Christmas " ^^ Have a happy Christmas party with your co-workers. Thank you very much. HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: ESSAY: > Some people prefer to cook at home. Other people prefer to eat out. Which do you prefer? Why? ** I prefer eating out to cokking at home. First of all, I am not good at cooking. Actually, I try to do my best to make delecious foods. But the finished foods are little bit strange. Sometimes they are badly seasoned with salt.Sometimes they are overdone or rare. Although I have been living for about 4 years as a homemaker. I have practiced to cook untill now. Making foods is always a difficult to me.^^ So, I prefer to eat out. Having a meal to eat out is mostly delecious. I want to delecious foods.^^ Second, I am a working woman. Except my off- duties ,I always run out of time to cook. So, It's convenient to use delivery services and to eat out.

Hi there, [이름]!

Thank you very much for doing your homework, and yes, I\'m going to have fun tomorrow. Anyway, please go over some of my corrections. Your answers are really good! You just need to be very careful when it comes to spelling and capitalization. Have a wonderful week ahead! See you on Monday!

-T. Giselle-

Hello T. Giselle !!

>> Hello, T. Giselle!!!

 Christmas Season makes people feel so good.

>> The Christmas season makes people feel so good.

Just word \" Christmas \" ^^

>> The word \'Christmas\' itself makes us happy.

 Have a happy Christmas party with your co-workers.

>> Correct.

 Thank you very much.

>> Correct.

 HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:

 ESSAY:

 > Some people prefer to cook at home. Other people prefer to eat out. Which do you prefer? Why?

 **

 I prefer eating out to cokking at home.

>> I prefer eating out cooking at home.

 First of all, I am not good at cooking.

>> Correct.

 Actually, I try to do my best to make delecious foods.

>> Actually, I try my best to make delicious foods.

 But the finished foods are little bit strange.

>> But when I finish cooking them, they taste strange.

Sometimes they are badly seasoned with salt.

>> Sometimes, they are badly seasoned with salt.

Sometimes they are overdone or rare.

>> Correct.

 Although I have been living for about 4 years as a homemaker. I have practiced to cook untill now.

>> Although I have been living for about 4 years as a housewife, I am still practicing.

Making foods is always a difficult to me.^^

>> Making foods is always a difficult for me. ^^

So, I prefer to eat out.

>> Correct.

Having a meal to eat out is mostly delecious.

>> Having a meal out is better.

 I want to delecious foods.^^

>> I want to eat delicious foods. ^^

 Second, I am a working woman.

>> Correct.

 Except my off- duties ,I always run out of time to cook.

>> Except on my days off, I always run out of time to cook.

So, It\'s convenient to use delivery services and to eat out.

>> So, it\'s convenient to use delivery services and to eat out.