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In the past, we don't have any information about the eating habits. People eat what they want using their own way. they don't care about that. In contrast, nowadays, people are exposed to many media that broadcast the bad habits and the good habits of eating. So, it is very popular and acheiving to folllw the good eating habits in Korea. But, I think people have to endure their appetite just for health and beauty. We need to rest and eat what we want somtimes like past people.

Dear [이름],   A marvelous evening to a wonderful woman like you! ^.^ Happy Thursday! ^^   First of all, I would like to say \"LONG TIME NO COMPOSITION\". Hahaha! ^^, I\'m just kidding. Seriously, I am really glad that you made your homework. Once again, you made me know you better through your writing. THANKS A LOT! ^^.   By the way, I agree that it is good to follow your eating habits. I really like Korean foods. I consider them healthy and appealing to the eyes.   Anyway, you made a very good composition. However, you still need to consider spelling and grammar when you write.   That\'s all for now! ^^ See you tomorrow! ^^,   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     In the past, we don\'t have any information about the eating habits. >> In the past, we don\'t have any information about eating habits. (Since we don\'t know all the eating habits, it\'s better not to put any article before EATING HABITS.) People eat what they want using their own way. >> CORRECT! they don\'t care about that. >> They don\'t care about that. (Don\'t forget to make the first letter of a sentence in big letter.) In contrast, nowadays, people are exposed to many media that broadcast the bad habits and the good habits of eating. >> CORRECT! >> OR: In contrast, nowadays, people are exposed to many media that broadcast the bad and good habits of eating. So, it is very popular and acheiving to folllw the good eating habits in Korea. >> So, it is very popular and achieving to follow the good eating habits in Korea. (Be careful with the spellings of FOLLOW and ACHIEVING.) But, I think people have to endure their appetite just for health and beauty. >> CORRECT! We need to rest and eat what we want somtimes like past people. >> We need to rest and eat what we want sometimes like people in the past. (Be careful with the spelling of SOMETIMES. It\'s better to say PEOPLE IN THE PAST than PAST PEOPLE.)