Hi, good morning.

2014-06-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Hi, A new day has dawned. "recession" Many people lost job and they even hard to interview to get a new job because a recession. "austere" Monks couldn't suffered patiently the austere measures any more, run out of the buddist temple. In upper sentense, what am I using the word natually insted of "suffer" or "stand" or "suppress" or others, please let me know most frequnt used word. We're going to have another hot day. I known that your country is very hot then Korea before rainy season. Stay healthy Jeny.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

It was nice talking with you this morning. Stand and suffer are the usual words that we use nowadays, but depends on what you;re trying to say. In addition, you can also use endure instead of stand.

Thank you very much and stay healthy as well.

T. Jeny

Hi,
>>correct
A new day has dawned.
>>correct
\"recession\"
Many people lost job and they even hard to interview to get a new job because a recession.

>>Many people lost their jobs and even have to undergo a difficult interview because of recession.

\"austere\"
Monks couldn\'t suffered patiently the austere measures any more, run out of the buddist temple.

>>Monks couldn\'t suffer patiently the austere measures anymore, so they run out of the Buddhist temple.

In upper sentense, what am I using the word natually insted of \"suffer\" or \"stand\" or \"suppress\" or others, please let me know most frequnt used word.

>>In the above, I normally use, suffer, stand, or suppress. Please, let me know what the most frequent word used.

We\'re going to have another hot day.

>>correct
I known that your country is very hot then Korea before rainy season.

>>I heard that your country has a warmer weather than Korea.
Stay healthy, Jeny.

>>correct

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