Hi Grace

It's nice to meet you You are my new teacher right? I do my best to be your best student^^ hehe Gettnig to the point, I will be sending an application to the university Please, make a carefulcheck whether the following sentences are correct or not. As a second officer,I was resposible for all aspects of safety of ship's navigation: maintenance of life saving appliances and navigation equipments such as EPIRB, steering gear, and ARPA radar and VHF As a apprentice officer, I learned many useful skills: maritime safety,navigation, and carriage of dangerous goods

Hi [이름]          Its a pleasure meeting you. Its a good thing that you will do everything to be my best student and I hope that because of this, you will also be a good English speaker someday. I will do my best to check all the corrections in your composition. Have a nice day and take care always.     It's nice to meet you >>>CorrectYou are my new teacher right? >>>Correct >>>Are you my new teacher?I do my best to be your best student^^ hehe>>>I'll do everything i can to be your best student ^^ hehe Gettnig to the point, I will be sending an application to the university >>>My point is, i will be sending an application to the universityPlease, make a carefulcheck whether the following sentences are correct or not. >>>Please, check careful whether the followng sentences are correct.As a second officer,I was resposible for all aspects of safety of ship's navigation >>>As a second officer, I am responsible for all the safety aspects of the ship's navigation.maintenance of life saving appliances and navigation equipments such as EPIRB, steering gear, and ARPA radar and VHF>>>Maintenace of life saving and navigational equipments such as EPIRB, steering gear, ARPA radar and VHF As a apprentice officer, I learned many useful skills: maritime safety,navigation, and carriage of dangerous goods >>>As a apprentice officer, I learned many useful skills such as maritime safety,navigation, and handling of dangerous goods.