Hi Grace
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Here are the corrections,
Be safe,
Please check the follwoing senteces if they are correct or not
>> Please check the following sentences if they are correct or
not.
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I
appreciate you for giving me the chance to apply for your university.
>> Correct
I am sending all the documents that you need.
>> I am sending you all the documents that you needed.
Plese,find the attached files.
>> Please fine the attached files.
I really want to know when I can receive the the
Admissions Board's final decision.
>> I really want to know when will I receive the Admission
Board뭩 final decision.
I have so much interest in the fild of maritime safety
that I want to study more deely about it(this?)
>> I뭢 very interested in the field of maritime safety that I
want to study deeply about it.
If I can get an opportunity to study at World Maritime
Uinversity, I will do my best for the developmnet of the university and myself
as we
>> If I get the opportunity to study at the World Maritime University, I will do my best for the development of the University and myself.
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