Hi Grace

2010-12-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jenny

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I’ve been working as a traner for as much as 7years When I first worked as a trainer, there were lots of things I had to learn such as the name of all the muscles in human’s body, how to teach poepl do excersice properly and,of course, safely and, more importantly, how to deal with people who get serious injury, to name a few. One of members in my gym had a terrible backache in a car accident. When he first came to the gym, he coulden’t even move his right leg and arm on the right side.

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Hi [이름]! I am so proud of you because you are an effective trainer. You are always willing to help others to be physically healthy. I hope that you will get to help a lot more. Take care! ^_^ I’ve been working as a traner for as much as 7years >> I’ve been working as a trainer for 7 years now.When I first worked as a trainer, there were lots of things I had to learn such as the name of all the muscles in human’s body, how to teach poepl do excersice properly and,of course, safely and, more importantly, how to deal with people who get serious injury, to name a few. >> When I first worked as a trainer, there were a lot of things I had to learn such as the names of all the muscles in the human body, how to teach people on how to exercise properly and safely, and how to deal with people who have injuries.One of members in my gym had a terrible backache in a car accident. >> One of the members in the gym had a terrible backache because of a car accident. When he first came to the gym, he coulden’t even move his right leg and arm on the right side. >> When he first came to the gym, he couldn’t even move his right leg and right arm.

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