Hi, Gray teacher!
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Hello [이름] ^^ good job for today\'s homework as always :D talk to you later ^^v
I usually spend my weekends take a relax for the sake of my tired mind and body for a week.
>> I usually spend my weekends by relaxing for the sake of my tired mind and body for a week.
I have time to recharge myself for work and my life.
>> CORRECT
So, I go to the fitness center or go on a picnic not too far away with my family, friends and boyfriend.
>> So, I go to the fitness center or go on a picnic not too far away with my family, my friends or with my boyfriend.
Sadly I feel like weekends are too short.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: Sadly, I feel that weekends are too short.
I don\'t need anything else and I wish the weekends would be longer than now.
>> I don\'t need anything else and I wish that the weekends would be longer.
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