Hi, Harmoney
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Hi,
I guess this is my first sending you an email.
FYI, I made a payment to extend my ENG class for another 7months.
I sent an email regarding my class time that I want to attend as same time as before, 21:30.
If you give me an topic then I will write you an email regarding the issue.
Let\'s talk about this thing on next tuesday.
Best,
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Hi, Dylan! Congrats on sending your very first message/email to me. Content-wise,
your email is clear and concise. I appreciate that you\'ve decided to
extend your English class for another 7 months, and I\'ve noted your preference
to attend the class at the same time as before, which is at 21:30. Regarding a topic for
discussion, I\'ll prepare something interesting for us to delve into during our
next meeting on Tuesday. Have a great and relaxing weekend~
~T.Harmony <3
>> ...this is my first time sending you an email.
FYI, I made a payment to extend my ENG class for another 7months.
>> CORRECT! (Just add a space in between \"7\" and \"months\")
I sent an email regarding my class time that I want to attend as same time as before, 21:30.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> I sent an email regarding my class time, stating that I want to attend at the same time as before, which is at 21:30.
If you give me an topic then I will write you an email regarding the issue.
If you give me an topic then I will write you an email regarding the issue.
>> If you give me a topic, then I will... (\"If, then\" statements are usually written with a comma (,) after the \"If...,\")
Let\'s talk about this thing on next tuesday.
>> Let\'s have a discussion about this matter next Tuesday. (Days of the week are written with the first letter being a capital letter. ^^)
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