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2010-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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Hi abby!! Long time no see in this writing way!. I 'll finish my graduate experiment within this weekend. after that, start english study to take advanced eng exam. these exam that i should make good scores doesnt contain speaking test, but more difficult than TOEIC and approching with native american sentences. I.m not scared, because of already know my faults when i use english. anyway i can`t attend next class to go to meet my grand parents. I plan to work with my cousins in their farms. I`m sure it `ll be good experiment though i`ll take just oneday. See you next wednesday!!

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Hello [이름]! How are you? I suppose you’re enjoying now with your relatives. Anyway, it’s good to have time with your family so you could refresh yourself from all the pressures you had doing your experiment. Moreover, I congratulate you for doing a good job on  your composition today. You made errors but I think, your sentences were constructed well. You must just be more aware of  your verb tenses as well as the word choices. Furthermore, you worked well! See you then tomorrow and take care! Enjoy the day ahead! ^_^ ABBY  Hi abby!!>> CORRECTLong time no see in this writing way!. >> It’s been a long time since I wrote my last composition. I 'll finish my graduate experiment within this weekend. >> CORRECT after that, start english study to take advanced eng exam. >> After that, I will start studying English again as  preparation for my Advance English Examination. these exam that i should make good scores doesnt contain speaking test, but more difficult than TOEIC and approching with native american sentences. >>  I should get a high score with this exam though it doesn’t have a speaking test but it is more difficult than TOEIC because I need to construct native American sentences. I.m not scared, because of already know my faults when i use english. >> I’m not scared because I already know my weakness in English. anyway i can`t attend next class to go to meet my grand parents. >> Anyway, I can’t attend our next class because I have to meet my grandparents. I plan to work with my cousins in their farms. >> CORRECT I`m sure it `ll be good experiment though i`ll take just oneday. >> I’m sure that I’ll do well on my experiment in spite of working with it for just a day. See you next wednesday!! >> See you on Wednesday!

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