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2014-07-18 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Hi there.^^ Are you keeping good evening?^^ I had been to my father's work field from today morning to 6AM. This place is very far from my house. So, I spent very mush time for that i went there and came back. These distance is fully 150Km!! If will go there again, I might require much more money to my father. Hhhhhh....^^;; -Homework for today- What kinds of punishments should you give to hustlers? Very long time ago, when i taked care of children choir, I used some way to some children hustlers. This way is very simple and easy. This is a way that i did not give this day's snack to them .^^;; Even though, it looks like to be easy, it is a best way to control children.^^

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What a long drive! You could have enjoyed it while listening to great songs, Kirk. It could have been a JOY RIDE! Nonetheless, good thing you don\'t feel so tired today. Your style in disciplining hustlers can be quite effective when they are still at a very young age. How about adults? I think it\'s a tough one! It\'s like old habits die hard. As for them, they\'ve gotten used to being such, and it can be quite difficult to change their being. In anyways, we should never stop trying to make ourselves better. This way, we can inspire other people. Have a safe say Kirk and enjoy your weekend ahead! _Klein Hi there.^^>>CorrectAre you keeping good evening?^^>>Are you keeping a good evening?I had been to my father\'s work field from today morning to 6AM.>>CorrectThis place is very far from my house.>>CorrectSo, I spent very mush time for that i went there and came back.>>So, I spent much time for travelling. >>So, I spent much time getting there and coming back.These distance is fully 150Km!!>>The distance is 150kms.! >>The total distance is 150kms.!If will go there again, I might require much more money to my father. Hhhhhh....^^;;>>If I will go there again, I might require much more money from my father.-Homework for today-What kinds of punishments should you give to hustlers?Very long time ago, when i taked care of children choir, I used some way to some children hustlers.>>Very long time ago, when I took care of some children in our choir, I used a way/method to discipline the hustlers.This way is very simple and easy.>>Correct!This is a way that i did not give this day\'s snack to them .^^;;>>This way is not giving them their day\'s snack. >>I did not give them their snack for the day.Even though, it looks like to be easy, it is a best way to control children.^^ >>Even though it looks easy, it is the best way to control children.

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