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Why are you passionate about customer service?
I found that I'm a people person when I was in 18 years old by doing part time job for the first time in hotel ballroom.
I was conviced from that service experience that I love the opportunity to make a connection with people and I love being able to make people happy by solving the problems they are having.
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I found that I\'m a people person when I was in 18 years old by doing part time job for the first time in hotel ballroom.
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I was conviced from that service experience that I love the opportunity to make a connection with people and I love being able to make people happy by solving the problems they are having
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