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2013-10-01 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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1. Q: Have you ever tried this before? A: Yes, I've tried it many times. 2. Q: How much money do you have? A: I have no absolutely money. 3. Q: Did you get a good night's sleep? A: No, I only slept six hours last night. 4. Q: Your brother can't come? A: No, and I wanted so much to see him! 5. Q: When were you in Greece? A: I was there last September. Hi leny~ Thank you for your advice everyday. Yesterday, I arrived home late time at PM11:00. After arrived home, I went outside for running to Han river. I need to exercise everyday because of my singing. Anyway, I arrived home at AM1:00 after I began to prepare our class. It was finshed AM2:00. I was very tired that time so i went to bed instantly.^^;;;; Thesedays, My company is getting to many work. So, my boss is happy. But, It is bad new for me because i have had not enough time for study English. Hahaha^^;;;; (In fact this is lie. I like be busy.^^) Have a good night, Leny. Bye^^ From Kirk~

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Hello there^^ Good evening^^ Thanks for your time in doing this. I hope that you are not that tired for today. Thanks for always showing your interest in our class. I will talk to you later^^ Teacher Leny   1. Q: Have you ever tried this before? A: Yes, I\'ve tried it many times. >>Correct2. Q: How much money do you have? A: I have no absolutely money. >>b) absolutely no3. Q: Did you get a good night\'s sleep? A: No, I only slept six hours last night. >>Correct4. Q: Your brother can\'t come? A: No, and I wanted so much to see him! >>Correct5. Q: When were you in Greece? A: I was there last September.>>CofrectHi leny~>>Hi Leny,Thank you for your advice everyday.>> CorrectYesterday, I arrived home late time at PM11:00.>>Yesterday, I arrived home late time at 11:00PM.After arrived home, I went outside for running to Han river.>>After I arriving home I went outside for a run at the Han River.I need to exercise everyday because of my singing.>> Correct >> I needed to exercise everyday because of my singing.Anyway, I arrived home at AM1:00 after I began to prepare our class.>>Anyway, I arrived home at 1:00 in the morning then after that I began to prepare for our class.It was finshed AM2:00. >>It was finished until 2:00 AM.I was very tired that time so i went to bed instantly.^^;;;;>>I was very tired that time so I went to bed immediately.Thesedays, My company is getting to many work.>> Thesedays, my company is getting too many work.So, my boss is happy.>>So my boss is happy.But, It is bad new for me because i have had not enough time for study English. Hahaha^^;;;;(In fact this is lie. I like be busy.^^)>> But it is a bad news for me because I don\'t have a enough time time to study English.Have a good night, Leny.>> Have a good night Leny.Bye^^>> CorrectFrom Kirk~ >>Correct

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