Hi Irene
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Irene
It was nice to meet you this morning.
I'm sure you make me a fluent speak in English in the near future.
Why would you care to provide what others ask from you?
(I don't exectly understand this question)
I'm working for cadiac device company as sales person.
As sales person, I have to do many things that my costomer ask me to such as picking them up to their house after work, paying for their dinner instead of them and so on.
If I refuse their terrible requests, they don't use our product at all
Eventually my sales performance will be poor.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir [이름]! Happy Friday! Thanks for these questions. I hope that i was able to answer them in today\'s class. Please don\'t hesitate to ask me more questions. ^_^ I know that will help you understand English more.
~T. Irene~
Hi Irene
It was nice to meet you this morning.
>>> Correct.
I\'m sure you make me a fluent speak in English in the near future.
>>> I\'m sure you can help me become a fluent English speaker in the near future.
Why would you care to provide what others ask from you?
(I don\'t exactly understand this question)
>>> Correct.
I\'m working for cardiac device company as sales person.
>>> I\'m working for a cardiac device company as a sales person.
As sales person, I have to do many things that my costomer ask me to such as picking them up to their house after work, paying for their dinner instead of them and so on.
>>> As a sales person, I have to do many things for my customers such as picking them up from their house after work, paying for dinner and so on.
If I refuse their terrible requests, they don\'t use our product at all
>>> Correct.
Eventually my sales performance will be poor.
>>> Eventually my sales performance will suffer.
~T. Irene~
Hi Irene
It was nice to meet you this morning.
>>> Correct.
I\'m sure you make me a fluent speak in English in the near future.
>>> I\'m sure you can help me become a fluent English speaker in the near future.
Why would you care to provide what others ask from you?
(I don\'t exactly understand this question)
>>> Correct.
I\'m working for cardiac device company as sales person.
>>> I\'m working for a cardiac device company as a sales person.
As sales person, I have to do many things that my costomer ask me to such as picking them up to their house after work, paying for their dinner instead of them and so on.
>>> As a sales person, I have to do many things for my customers such as picking them up from their house after work, paying for dinner and so on.
If I refuse their terrible requests, they don\'t use our product at all
>>> Correct.
Eventually my sales performance will be poor.
>>> Eventually my sales performance will suffer.
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