Hi. Isabel

2013-07-22 · 첨삭 강사 Isabel

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Hi. Long time no talk. It's beem a long time. How have you been? You know, I traveled other country and visited my hometown. I missed you. Did you miss me? I was full of the news because I wanted to talk with you. I was very delighted because of your laughter this afternoon. Thank you my sister. Tomorrow class, I want to talk about movies which your favorite movie and my favorite movie. What's your favorite movie in your life? 1. Can you ______ some cheese for the pizza? b. great 2. It's not healthy to eat too much ______. b. meat 3. I was really ______ today. b. bored 4. Can you come ______ for a second? a. here 5. We're having ______ for dinner tonight. a. steak 6. What is the ______ number of this product? a. serial 7. The doctor has many ______. b. patients 8. That ______ digs for coal all day. a. miner 9. Is this ______ book? a. your 10. Why does that cat have no ______? tail

강사 첨삭

Hello there sister! :) Yes, it\'s been awhile! Of course, I missed you! :) Thank you for sharing about your trip. I really enjoyed listening to every detail. I was also delighted with your enthusiasm in telling your news. Yes, we can talk about movies tomorrow. Well, my favorite movies are 51st Dates and The Notebook. I couldn\'t [이름]ose between the two so, both of them are my favorite movies. :) How about you? What is your favorite movie? I\'ll be calling you tomorrow to know your answer my dear. Have a great night and smile always! :) Always, T. Isabel :) Hi. >>Correct! >>OR: Hi! Long time no talk. >>Correct!It\'s beem a long time. >>It\'s been a long time.How have you been? >>Correct!You know, I traveled other country and visited my hometown. >>You know that I traveled to another country and visited my hometown.I missed you. >>Correct! Did you miss me? >>Correct!I was full of the news because I wanted to talk with you. >>I was full of news, because of that, I wanted to talk to you. >>OR: I have a lot of news to tell you.I was very delighted because of your laughter this afternoon. >>Correct!Thank you my sister. >>Correct!Tomorrow class, I want to talk about movies which your favorite movie and my favorite movie. >>Tomorrow, I want to talk about movies. We can talk about our favorite movies.What\'s your favorite movie in your life?>>Correct! >>OR: What\'s your all-time favorite movie?1. Can you ______ some cheese for the pizza? b. great>>grate2. It\'s not healthy to eat too much ______. b. meat>>Correct!3. I was really ______ today. b. bored>>Correct!4. Can you come ______ for a second? a. here>>Correct!5. We\'re having ______ for dinner tonight. a. steak>>Correct!6. What is the ______ number of this product? a. serial>>Correct!7. The doctor has many ______. b. patients>>Correct!8. That ______ digs for coal all day. a. miner>>Correct!9. Is this ______ book? a. your>>Correct!10. Why does that cat have no ______? tail >>Correct!

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