Hi. Isabel
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi.
Long time no talk.
It's beem a long time.
How have you been?
You know, I traveled other country and visited my hometown.
I missed you. Did you miss me?
I was full of the news because I wanted to talk with you.
I was very delighted because of your laughter this afternoon.
Thank you my sister.
Tomorrow class, I want to talk about movies which your favorite movie and my
favorite movie.
What's your favorite movie in your life?
1. Can you ______ some cheese for the pizza?
b. great
2. It's not healthy to eat too much ______.
b. meat
3. I was really ______ today.
b. bored
4. Can you come ______ for a second?
a. here
5. We're having ______ for dinner tonight.
a. steak
6. What is the ______ number of this product?
a. serial
7. The doctor has many ______.
b. patients
8. That ______ digs for coal all day.
a. miner
9. Is this ______ book?
a. your
10. Why does that cat have no ______?
tail
강사 첨삭
Hello there sister! :)
Yes, it\'s been awhile!
Of course, I missed you! :)
Thank you for sharing about your trip. I really enjoyed listening to every detail.
I was also delighted with your enthusiasm in telling your news.
Yes, we can talk about movies tomorrow.
Well, my favorite movies are 51st Dates and The Notebook.
I couldn\'t [이름]ose between the two so, both of them are my favorite movies. :)
How about you? What is your favorite movie?
I\'ll be calling you tomorrow to know your answer my dear.
Have a great night and smile always! :)
Always,
T. Isabel :)
Hi.
>>Correct!
>>OR: Hi!
Long time no talk.
>>Correct!It\'s beem a long time.
>>It\'s been a long time.How have you been?
>>Correct!You know, I traveled other country and visited my hometown.
>>You know that I traveled to another country and visited my hometown.I missed you.
>>Correct!
Did you miss me?
>>Correct!I was full of the news because I wanted to talk with you.
>>I was full of news, because of that, I wanted to talk to you.
>>OR: I have a lot of news to tell you.I was very delighted because of your laughter this afternoon.
>>Correct!Thank you my sister.
>>Correct!Tomorrow class, I want to talk about movies which your favorite movie and my favorite movie.
>>Tomorrow, I want to talk about movies. We can talk about our favorite movies.What\'s your favorite movie in your life?>>Correct!
>>OR: What\'s your all-time favorite movie?1. Can you ______ some cheese for the pizza? b. great>>grate2. It\'s not healthy to eat too much ______. b. meat>>Correct!3. I was really ______ today. b. bored>>Correct!4. Can you come ______ for a second? a. here>>Correct!5. We\'re having ______ for dinner tonight. a. steak>>Correct!6. What is the ______ number of this product? a. serial>>Correct!7. The doctor has many ______. b. patients>>Correct!8. That ______ digs for coal all day. a. miner>>Correct!9. Is this ______ book? a. your>>Correct!10. Why does that cat have no ______? tail
>>Correct!
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