hi^^ it's my homework!!
학생이 쓴 원문
1)making
2)make
3)make
4)make
5)make
Friend.
Recently, i have a few friends. Because some of my school mate were marriaged or they
are high position t[이름] me in social. So we seldom [이름]t again. But i can unerstand our
situation.
But fortunately i have new friends. We met at company so somtimes we can [이름]t at resturant, movie theater and cafe and church. Forthemore we had a nice short trips around seoul.
And after going to London, i've got new friends. One of them is a actress of korea public broadcast but she is not famous yet. One of them is a book designer.
So we often [이름]t and go to see a performance and restaurant. On the whole i usually get on well with my friend. i hope we're keep going.
Sometimes i've kept in touch with my Europian friends on facebook. They met in london and we were in same class. One of them was my ENGLISH teacher. i miss them.
i hope my friends are well in every where!!
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
T[이름]k you so much for doing your homework. It\'s nice to know that you\'ve got new friends. I know that you are very friendly and approachable so it\'s not impossible for you to gain friends right away. Anyway, regarding your composition, I would advice you to be extra careful with your spelling, okay? I\'ll talk to you later. Take care.
1)making
>>CORRECT!
2)make
>>CORRECT!
3)make
>>CORRECT!
4)make
>>do
5)make
>>CORRECT!
Friend.
>>CORRECT!
Recently, i have a few friends. Because some of my school mate were marriaged or they are high position t[이름] me in social.
>>Recently, I made new friends because some of my schoolmates were already married or they have a high position t[이름] I do socially.
So we seldom [이름]t again.
>>We seldom [이름]t each other.
But i can unerstand our situation.
>>Nonetheless, I can understand our situation.
>>I understand our situation.
But fortunately i have new friends.
>>Fortunately, I got new friends.
We met at company so somtimes we can [이름]t at resturant, movie theater and cafe and church.
>> We met in the company so sometimes we [이름]t at the restaurant, movie theater, cafe, and church.
Forthemore we had a nice short trips around seoul.
>>Furthermore, we had nice short trips around Seoul.
And after going to London, i\'ve got new friends.
>>After going to London, I\'ve found new friends.
One of them is a actress of korea public broadcast but she is not famous yet.
>>One of them is an actress in Korea who works as a public broadcaster but is not famous yet.
One of them is a book designer.
>>CORRECT!
So we often [이름]t and go to see a performance and restaurant.
>>We often [이름]t and go see a performance or eat at a restaurant.
On the whole i usually get on well with my friend.
>>On the whole, I usually get on well with my friend.
i hope we\'re keep going.
>>I hope it keeps going like this.
Sometimes i\'ve kept in touch with my Europian friends on facebook.
>>Sometimes I keep in touch with my European friends through facebook.
They met in london and we were in same class.
>>We met in London and we were at the same class.
One of them was my ENGLISH teacher.
>>CORRECT!
i miss them.
>>I miss them.
i hope my friends are well in every where!!>>I hope my friends are all well wherever they are.
>>CORRECT!
2)make
>>CORRECT!
3)make
>>CORRECT!
4)make
>>do
5)make
>>CORRECT!
Friend.
>>CORRECT!
Recently, i have a few friends. Because some of my school mate were marriaged or they are high position t[이름] me in social.
>>Recently, I made new friends because some of my schoolmates were already married or they have a high position t[이름] I do socially.
So we seldom [이름]t again.
>>We seldom [이름]t each other.
But i can unerstand our situation.
>>Nonetheless, I can understand our situation.
>>I understand our situation.
But fortunately i have new friends.
>>Fortunately, I got new friends.
We met at company so somtimes we can [이름]t at resturant, movie theater and cafe and church.
>> We met in the company so sometimes we [이름]t at the restaurant, movie theater, cafe, and church.
Forthemore we had a nice short trips around seoul.
>>Furthermore, we had nice short trips around Seoul.
And after going to London, i\'ve got new friends.
>>After going to London, I\'ve found new friends.
One of them is a actress of korea public broadcast but she is not famous yet.
>>One of them is an actress in Korea who works as a public broadcaster but is not famous yet.
One of them is a book designer.
>>CORRECT!
So we often [이름]t and go to see a performance and restaurant.
>>We often [이름]t and go see a performance or eat at a restaurant.
On the whole i usually get on well with my friend.
>>On the whole, I usually get on well with my friend.
i hope we\'re keep going.
>>I hope it keeps going like this.
Sometimes i\'ve kept in touch with my Europian friends on facebook.
>>Sometimes I keep in touch with my European friends through facebook.
They met in london and we were in same class.
>>We met in London and we were at the same class.
One of them was my ENGLISH teacher.
>>CORRECT!
i miss them.
>>I miss them.
i hope my friends are well in every where!!>>I hope my friends are all well wherever they are.
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