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2012-09-06 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

학생이 쓴 원문

1.time is money 2.time to call it a night 3.time flies when you're having fun 4.time is running out 5.time-out I hope to visit the Pyramid of Egypt. I read the name of Pyramid on book. Historical places are important. Because it has a good idea for morden people. In the future, the pyramid of Eygypt will be still one of the famouse places. Yes, the historical place can leave huge of benefits.The famous places is a important factor of economy. The government should increase security services. Because they should [이름]dle many tourlist. It helps traffic jam and crowded lines.

강사 첨삭

Hi there! T[이름]k you very much as well for always being active in class and for consistently doing your homework.  I am glad that you always enjoy our class.  The corrections are written below. See you tomorrow! ~Teacher Lara~ 1.time is money >> Correct2.time to call it a night >> time to call it a day3.time flies when you\'re having fun >> Correct4.time is running out >> Correct5.time-out>> CorrectI hope to visit the Pyramid of Egypt. >> Correct I read the name of Pyramid on book.>> I read the word \'pyramid\' from a book.Historical places are important. Because it has a good idea for morden people.>>  Historical places are important to know because it gives good ideas to modern people.In the future, the pyramid of Eygypt will be still one of the famouse places.>> In the future, the pyramid of Egypt will still be one of the famous places.Yes, the historical place can leave huge of benefits. >> Yes, historical places can leave huge benefits. The famous places is a important factor of economy.>> Famous places are important factor in our economy.The government should increase security services. >> The governemnt should increase the security level. Because they should [이름]dle many tourlist. >> Because they should protect many tourists. It helps traffic jam and crowded lines. >> It shold help regulating the traffic and manage crowded areas.

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