Hi Jacey~

Happy Monday [이름]! :)

I can say you have excellent long term goals.

There\'s nothing wrong with having high ambitions. :)

A manager wishes to know if you have realistic expectations and if you have an ambition in life.

It also shows how eager you are to work in their company and how long you plan to stay.

Great job on your composition. ^^,)

--- Teacher Jacey :)

Happy Saturday~ Jacey~~

>> Happy Saturday Jacey.

If I get a chance to join your company, my first goal is to become a team manager of the accounting department within 5 years.

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OR

If given the chance to join your company, my target goal is that in 5 years time, I will become a team manager in the accounting department.

There are 3 ways to achieve my goal.

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First, I will provide the management with financial information including financial statements.

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And I am sure that it would be based on accuracy and timeliness.

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And second, when you need a strategic decision such as feasibility analysis, liquidity risk, I will give the best information for decision support

>> Second, when you need a strategic decision such as feasibility analysis and liquidity risks, I will give the best information for decision support.

And third, I will build a high efficient system of finance and accounting. 

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It would be very helpful to improve work process.

>> It would be very helpful in improving the work process.

Those are my basic plans for your company.

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And my next goal is to become an executive of your company within 10 years. 

>> And my next goal is to become an executive officer in your company within 10 years.

When I see your company\'s growth, you can establish foreign corporations in other country.

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In that case, I will be in charge of managing one corporation or branch in your company.

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Though this way, I will be an executive of your company.

>> Through this, I will be an executive in your company.