Hi Jane

2012-02-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Hi Jane This is [이름]. I'm so happy to meet you. Before I got a your call, I was so nervous. Because I'm not good at English..:-( Even though I had lived in the Philippines for three months..... I really wanna improve my English until I go to Hawai...at least I wanna talk with many people in English fluently. I will do my best, plz teach me more and more. Thank you :-) my homework. 1) My friend is good _at_ playing volleyball. 2) She complains _about_ bullying. 3) They are afraid _of_ losing the match. 4) She doesn't feel _like_ working on the computer. 5) We are looking forward _to_ going out at the weekend. 6) Laura dreams _in_ living on a small island. 7) Andrew apologized _for_ being late. 8) Do you agree _with_ staying in a foreign country? 9) The girls insisted _on_ going out with Kerry. 10) Edward thinks _about_ climbing trees this afternoon.

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HI!!! How are you? Happy Friday! I hope you will have a great weekend. You did a great job in your homework. Thank you for sending me your composition. Don\'t worry I am here to help you.Take Care. -Teacher Jane-   Hi Jane >>CorrectThis is [이름]. >>Correct I\'m so happy to meet you. >>CorrectBefore I got a your call, I was so nervous. >>Correct Because I\'m not good at English..:-( >>Because I\'m not good speaking in English. Even though I had lived in the Philippines for three months..... >>Eventhough I lived in the Philippines for three months.I really wanna improve my English until I go to Hawai... >>I really wanna improve my English skills before I go to Hawaii. at least I wanna talk with many people in English fluently. >>I want to talk to many people speaking in English fluently. I will do my best, plz teach me more and more. >>I will do my best. Please teach me a lot of things in English. Thank you :-) >>Correctmy homework. >>Correct1) My friend is good _at_ playing volleyball. >>Correct2) She complains _about_ bullying. >>Correct3) They are afraid _of_ losing the match. >>Correct4) She doesn\'t feel _like_ working on the computer. >>Correct5) We are looking forward _to_ going out at the weekend. >>Correct6) Laura dreams _in_ living on a small island. >>Laura dreams of living on a small island.7) Andrew apologized _for_ being late. >>Correct8) Do you agree _with_ staying in a foreign country? >>Correct9) The girls insisted _on_ going out with Kerry. >>Correct10) Edward thinks _about_ climbing trees this afternoon. >>Edward thinks of climbing trees this afternoon.  

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