Hi Jane!

2012-06-14 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I just check your feedback today and yesterday's. First I also happy to start my English study with you. It is not easy to express my opinion in English, but it is a obstacle to overcome. isn't it? You said you have interest in law. I wonder that you still try to be a lawyer. I do not know about legal system of your country but in recent future a interchange of among Asia country will be increase. So we lawyers need to consider a new formation of legal system which is proper to new era. Have you been to Korea? I have not been to Philippine. I hope We can know two country better through our lecture. Have a nice day!! [이름].

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Hi there, Atty. [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! I am so glad to have a student who has the same interest with me. I think we can talk about so many things about our interest. Well, I wanted to be a lawyer when I was a student, but now my passion is in teaching. Maybe in the future I will pursue my dream and enter Law School, but it\'s still far from happening. Nevertheless, I am still into laws and legal system. Anyway, I\'ve never been to Korea. I\'ve always wanted to visit your country, but there\'s no chance for me to do so. Regarding your English skill, I am sure that you can overcome the obstacle and you will be speaking confidently in English in the future. Take care and have a nice day! T. JanE ^^ I just check your feedback today and yesterday\'s. >> I just checked your feedback for our class today and yesterday.First I also happy to start my English study with you.>> I am also to start my English class with you.It is not easy to express my opinion in English, but it is a obstacle to overcome. isn\'t it?>> It is not easy to express my opinion in English, but it is an obstacle to overcome, isn\'t it?You said you have interest in law. >> Correct I wonder that you still try to be a lawyer.>> I wonder if you still want to be a lawyer.I do not know about legal system of your country but in recent future a interchange of among Asia country will be increase. >> I don\'t know about the legal system in your country, but in the near future, an interchange among Sian countries will increase.So we lawyers need to consider a new formation of legal system which is proper to new era.>> So, we lawyers, need to consider a new formation of the legal system which is suitable to the new era.Have you been to Korea? >> Correct I have not been to Philippine.>> I have never been to the Philippines.I hope We can know two country better through our lecture.>> I hope we can learn about each other\'s country through our lecture.Have a nice day!!>> Correct

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