Hi, Jane~
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher Jane~
It's your new student [이름]. ^^;;
I'm so sorry because I didn't answer your phone call this morning.
My cell phone was out of battery and I didn't know about it.
We'll definitely be able to talk on the phone tomorrow, I promise~~
And...Jane,
I'm a new student to you, and you are also a new teacher to me.
So, I don't think we are that familiar with each other yet.
Honestly, because I really like my previous teacher Abegail and didn't expect to change the teacher this month at all, it was a bit embarrassing at first when I got your call.
But I want to come to feel it more comfortable to talk with you and get to know your character more and get closer. ^^
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I'm so glad to receive a composition from you today! It's a pleasure on my part for us to get to know each other better so that we'll be more comfortable during our class. I will do my best to help you and please be completely honest when there is something that you don't like about me. I know that I can never be like Teacher Abegail but I will do my best to be a good teacher in my own way.
Jane ^^
Hello, teacher Jane. It's your new student [이름].
>> correct!!
>> This is [이름], your new student. ->> better
I'm so sorry because I didn't answer your phone call this morning.
>> correct!!
>> I'm so sorry for not answering your phone call this morning. ->> better
My cell phone was out of battery and I didn't know about it.
>> correct!!
We'll definitely be able to talk on the phone tomorrow, I promise
>> correct!!
And...Jane, I'm a new student to you, and you are also a new teacher to me.
>> correct!!
So, I don't think we are that familiar with each other yet.
>> correct!!
>> So, I think we're not yet familiar with each other. ->> better
Honestly, because I really like my previous teacher Abegail and didn't expect to change the teacher this month at all, it was a bit embarrassing at first when I got your call.>> Honestly, it was a bit embarrassing when I got your call at first because I didn't expect that I will have a new teacher this month since I really like my previous teacher Abegail.
But I want to come to feel it more comfortable to talk with you and get to know your character more and get closer.
>> But I want to feel more comfortable talking to you and I hope to get to know your character more for us to get closer.
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