Hi, Jane~

2010-06-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Jane, this is a letter I wrote to one of my foreign friends. Can you proofread this please? Dear [Name]. Hi, OOO~ I'm happy to hear you are going to come to Korea! WOW~finally~^o^ When are you coming? If you made an exact plan about when to come, please let me know.^^ And where are you going to stay in Korea? In Seoul or other area? I'm looking forward to meeting you soon here in Korea. ^o^ By the way, how about your exam? You said you were going to take exams on June 9 and 10. Were the exams about your major to graduate from Univ. or about Korean language for coming to Korea? You did it well?^^ haha I really hope you would have got a great result on your tests no matter what they were about. Hoping to hear from you soon, Y-K

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Hi [이름]! Thanks for another composition from you. Please be guided by the corrections. I hope that this would be of great help. Jane ^^   Jane, this is a letter I wrote to one of my foreign friends. Can you proofread this please? >> correct!! >> I wrote this letter for one of my foreign friends. ->> better Dear [Name].Hi, OOO~I'm happy to hear you are going to come to Korea! WOW~finally~^o^>> correct!! >> I'm happy to hear that you are coming to Korea. ->> better When are you coming? If you made an exact plan about when to come, please let me know.^^ >> correct!! And where are you going to stay in Korea? In Seoul or other area? >> correct!! I'm looking forward to meeting you soon here in Korea. ^o^ >> correct!! By the way, how about your exam? >> correct!!You said you were going to take exams on June 9 and 10. >> correct!! >> You said you would take exams on June 9 and 10. ->> better Were the exams about your major to graduate from Univ. or about Korean language for coming to Korea?>> Were the exams about your major in the University? Or is it about Korean language since you're coming to Korea? You did it well?^^ haha >> Did you do well? I really hope you would have got a great result on your tests no matter what they were about.>> I really hope that you will get great result on your tests. Hoping to hear from you soon, Y-K >> correct!!

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