Hi, Jane~
학생이 쓴 원문
Jane, this is a letter I wrote to one of my foreign friends.
Can you proofread this please?
Dear [Name].
Hi, OOO~
I'm happy to hear you are going to come to Korea! WOW~finally~^o^
When are you coming? If you made an exact plan about when to come, please let me know.^^
And where are you going to stay in Korea?
In Seoul or other area?
I'm looking forward to meeting you soon here in Korea. ^o^
By the way, how about your exam?
You said you were going to take exams on June 9 and 10.
Were the exams about your major to graduate from Univ. or about Korean language for coming to Korea?
You did it well?^^ haha
I really hope you would have got a great result on your tests no matter what they were about.
Hoping to hear from you soon, Y-K
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thanks for another composition from you. Please be guided by the corrections. I hope that this would be of great help.
Jane ^^
Jane, this is a letter I wrote to one of my foreign friends. Can you proofread this please?
>> correct!!
>> I wrote this letter for one of my foreign friends. ->> better
Dear [Name].Hi, OOO~I'm happy to hear you are going to come to Korea! WOW~finally~^o^>> correct!!
>> I'm happy to hear that you are coming to Korea. ->> better
When are you coming? If you made an exact plan about when to come, please let me know.^^
>> correct!!
And where are you going to stay in Korea? In Seoul or other area?
>> correct!!
I'm looking forward to meeting you soon here in Korea. ^o^
>> correct!!
By the way, how about your exam?
>> correct!!You said you were going to take exams on June 9 and 10.
>> correct!!
>> You said you would take exams on June 9 and 10. ->> better
Were the exams about your major to graduate from Univ. or about Korean language for coming to Korea?>> Were the exams about your major in the University? Or is it about Korean language since you're coming to Korea?
You did it well?^^ haha
>> Did you do well?
I really hope you would have got a great result on your tests no matter what they were about.>> I really hope that you will get great result on your tests.
Hoping to hear from you soon, Y-K
>> correct!!
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