hi, jane

2012-08-21 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Wow! (It's raining cats and dogs today!) I wish I'd brought my umbrella to school! b. It's raining heavily. 2. When I told my mom I would be home around 2 am, (she had a cow!) c. My mom was really upset. 3. Jean: How did you know it was my birthday today? Susan: Oh, (a little birdie told me!) b. An unnamed person told Susan about Jean's birthday. 4. Frank: Why didn't your brother ride the roller coaster with us? Sam: Oh, he's such (a scaredy cat!) He won't get on any fast ride. a. Sam's brother is afraid to ride the roller coaster. 5. When the telephone salesman told me I could buy some concert tickets for only $10.00 if I gave him my credit card number, (it seemed a little fishy to me), so I hung up the phone. c. I thought the phone salesman was dishonest and I felt suspicious of him. 6. I never learned how to use a computer, so I lost my job to a new employee. (It's a dog-eat-dog world.) a. Only the strong or the best survive.

강사 첨삭

Hi there! \"The more that you read, the more things you will know. The more that you learn, the more places you\'ll go.\" Thank you so much for your homework  today! You just had a perfect score. Good job! I appreciate your effort in doing your homework. Keep up the good start! I want to commend you for alotting your time just to accomplish your homewrok. Please always remember that by constant pratice and perseverance, you\'ll be at par with native English speakers. We can do it! We are almost there! Catch you later :) ~T. Jane^^ Here are my corrections for you: 1. Wow! (It\'s raining cats and dogs today!) I wish I\'d brought my umbrella to school!b. It\'s raining heavily.>> Correct2. When I told my mom I would be home around 2 am, (she had a cow!)c. My mom was really upset.>> Correct3. Jean: How did you know it was my birthday today?Susan: Oh, (a little birdie told me!)b. An unnamed person told Susan about Jean\'s birthday.>> Correct4. Frank: Why didn\'t your brother ride the roller coaster with us?Sam: Oh, he\'s such (a scaredy cat!) He won\'t get on any fast ride.a. Sam\'s brother is afraid to ride the roller coaster.>> Correct5. When the telephone salesman told me I could buy some concert tickets for only $10.00 if I gave him my credit card number, (it seemed a little fishy to me), so I hung up the phone.c. I thought the phone salesman was dishonest and I felt suspicious of him.>> Correct6. I never learned how to use a computer, so I lost my job to a new employee. (It\'s a dog-eat-dog world.)a. Only the strong or the best survive >> Correct (Whoa! PERFECT)

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