Hi! Jane!

2012-09-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Hi. Jane.  It's too late to work my homework. Yesterday, I had computer class for all day. I'm learning the advanced computer programming course for android smart-phone for 2 weeks from yesterday. So I'm so busy. But I have to study English, because I have to meet the foreign clients in my own business. It's the reason why I want to study English. I had been in Canada for 3 months in 2002. 10 years ago, I studyed English and I could speak English with foreigner. But it's long long time ago, so now I almost forgot English.. ;) I want to talk with you freely about myself and yourself. I want to know about you, too! :) See you soon~

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Hi there, Ms. [Name]! Thank you for your composition today! I am really gload to have you as my student! I have a very good impression of you. I believe that you are a persistent woman and this helps you in achieving your goals in life. I hope that you will be successful in your chosen field. I am excited not only for our class but also for the development of the applications you\'re working on. We have just started with our class, so we have much time to get to know each other better. Feel free to ask me anything. Take care and have a wonderful day! T. JanE ^^ Hi. Jane >> Correct It\'s too late to work my homework.>> It\'s too late to submit my homework.Yesterday, I had computer class for all day. >> Yesterday, I had a computer class the whole day.I\'m learning the advanced computer programming course for android smart-phone for 2 weeks from yesterday. >> I\'m taking avanced computer programming course for android smartphones  for two weeks from yesterday.So I\'m so busy. >> Correct But I have to study English, because I have to meet foreign clients in my own business. >> Correct It\'s the reason why I want to study English.>> Correct I had been in Canada for 3 months in 2002. >> I stayed in canada for 3 months in 2002.10 years ago, I studyed English and I could speak English with foreigner. >> 10 years ago, I studied English and I could speak English with foreigners.But it\'s long long time ago, so now I almost forgot English.. ;)>> But it was a long time ago, so now, I almost forgot English.I want to talk with you freely about myself and yourself. >> Correct I want to know about you, too! :)>> Correct See you soon~ >> Correct

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