Hi ! Jane

2010-12-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi! Jane I saw your picture on the Internet this morning. You look very quit and nice. I think you look around my son's age, even thought you seem mature for your age. i really enjoy study with you and I appreciate your teaching and attitude. I think you must have much teaching experience. Jane, I have a problem, the problem is that I'm going to travel to Italy this weekend So I want to delay next week class. I love to study with you, there for when I come back to Korea on January 2011, I want to study with you again Thank you Jane See you on Wednesday!

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. O'hara! Thank you for your composition today. Also, thank you for the compliment. I want to let you know that I also enjoy our conversations. You are very attentive and you respond promptly. Regarding your schedule, you can discuss that with our Korean Manager. You just have to let him know that you are having a trip and that you want to put your class on hold. I hope to hear from you again and I do hope to have you in my class. Take care and have a nice day!   Hi! Jane>> correctI saw your picture on the Internet this morning.>> correctYou look very quit and nice.>> You look very quiet and nice.I think you look around my son's age, even thought you seem mature for your age.>> I think you look around my son's age, even though you seem mature for your age.i really enjoy study with you and I appreciate your teaching and attitude.>> I really enjoy studying with you and I appreciate your teaching attitude.I think you must have much teaching experience.>> correctJane, I have a problem, the problem is that I'm going to travel to Italy this weekend>> correctSo I want to delay next week class.>> So I want to put our class next week on hold.I love to study with you, there for when I come back to Korea on January 2011, I want to study with you again >> correctThank you Jane >> correctSee you on Wednesday! >> correct

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