hi Jane^^ ♥
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Choose the correct answer:
1. Andrea knows the material very well. She always treats us good.
2. You must send payments regularly. We deal on a strict cash basis.
3. The mechanic's tools were good. The foreman said that his work was well done.
4. She worked carefully with the sick child. She was a very careful worker.
5. He did not pass the course as easily as he thought he would.
It is very difficult for me to decide what title I choose. About for an hour, I have thought about it. But I haven’t decided it yet. Until now, the main ideas in my writings are not various. They are about just friends and traveling. Maybe, I am going to write something about trip too, because I will go trip to Jeju island this weekend and Busan in February. Of course, each traveling is different and has its own meaning. But trip is just trip like going somewhere strange or get relaxed or enjoying myself. The details are different but on the second thought, the patterns are same. Actually, I have something to write about. Few hours ago, I watched a television program. The people showed there were Korean popular actresses. In the program, they went traveling somewhere and showed some episodes there. They went to Croatia. It was very fantastic place. I want to write about it but it is also about trip. It is bored to me as well as to you. I need to be more creative.
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Hi there, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for your composition! I don\'t really think that your topics in your writings are boring. I am always interested in them because I am always curious about your trips. I don\'t get to travel, and stories about trips make me feel inspired to go on a trip someday. Honestly, I am looking forward to hearing your story about your Jeju Island trip this week. I\'m sure you\'ll be sharing many interesting things with me. Take care and see you later!
T. JanE ^^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Choose the correct answer:1. Andrea knows the material very well. She always treats us good.>> Andrea knows the material very well. She always treats us well.
2. You must send payments regularly. We deal on a strict cash basis.>> Correct
3. The mechanic\'s tools were good. The foreman said that his work was well done.>> Correct
4. She worked carefully with the sick child. She was a very careful worker.>> Correct
5. He did not pass the course as easily as he thought he would.>> Correct It is very difficult for me to decide what title I choose. >> It is very difficult for me to decide what title to choose.
About for an hour, I have thought about it.
>> For about an hour, I have thought about it.
But I haven’t decided it yet.
>> But I haven\'t decided yet.
Until now, the main ideas in my writings are not various. >> Correct
They are about just friends and traveling.
>> They are just about friends and traveling.
Maybe, I am going to write something about trip too, because I will go trip to Jeju island this weekend and Busan in February.
>> Maybe, I am going to write somethhing about my trip again, because I will go on a trip to Jeju Island this weekend, and to Busan in February.
Of course, each traveling is different and has its own meaning.
>> Correct
But trip is just trip like going somewhere strange or get relaxed or enjoying myself. >> But the trip is just about going somewhere strange, having relaxation or enjoying myself.
The details are different but on the second thought, the patterns are same.
>> Correct
Actually, I have something to write about.
>> Correct
Few hours ago, I watched a television program. >> Correct
The people showed there were Korean popular actresses.
>> The cast in that program were popular Korean actresses.
In the program, they went traveling somewhere and showed some episodes there.
>> Correct
They went to Croatia. >> Correct
It was very fantastic place.
>> It was a very fantastic place.
I want to write about it but it is also about trip.
>> I want to write about it, but it is also about a trip.
It is bored to me as well as to you. >> It is boring to me and to you as well.
I need to be more creative.
>> Correct
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