Hi ! Jane
학생이 쓴 원문
It's been a long time that we had share conversation.
I was really happy that we met again.
It's too early for me that I study phone English at 9;20am.
However some time, even thougt I can't prepare our class,
I'm beleave that you will understand my situation.
Anyway, Jain!
It was nice to say you again, see you on Wednesday^^
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. O'hara!
Thank you so much for your composition today. I am so happy to have you back! I've always wanted to talk to you again! Don't worry about your class schedule, let's work on that together. Have a wonderful day!
T. Jane ^^
It's been a long time that we had share conversation.
>> It's been a long time since we had shared a conversation.I was really happy that we met again.
>> correct
>> I was really happy to talk to you again. (better)It's too early for me that I study phone English at 9;20am.
>> It's too early for me to study English at 9:20am.However some time, even thougt I can't prepare our class, I'm beleave that you will understand my situation.
>> However, even though I can't prepare for our class sometimes, I believe that you will understand my situation.Anyway, Jain! It was nice to say you again, see you on Wednesday^^
>> Anyway Jane, it was nice to talk to you again. See you on Wednesday.
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