Hi ! Jane

2011-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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It's been a long time that we had share conversation. I was really happy that we met again. It's too early for me that I study phone English at 9;20am. However some time, even thougt I can't prepare our class, I'm beleave that you will understand my situation. Anyway, Jain! It was nice to say you again, see you on Wednesday^^

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Hello Ms. O'hara! Thank you so much for your composition today. I am so happy to have you back! I've always wanted to talk to you again! Don't worry about your class schedule, let's work on that together. Have a wonderful day! T. Jane ^^   It's been a long time that we had share conversation. >> It's been a long time since we had shared a conversation.I was really happy that we met again. >> correct >> I was really happy to talk to you again. (better)It's too early for me that I study phone English at 9;20am. >> It's too early for me to study English at 9:20am.However some time, even thougt I can't prepare our class, I'm beleave that you will understand my situation. >> However, even though I can't prepare for our class sometimes, I believe that you will understand my situation.Anyway, Jain! It was nice to say you again, see you on Wednesday^^ >> Anyway Jane, it was nice to talk to you again. See you on Wednesday.

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