hi~~ jane
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi~~ Jane
nice to meet you today !
I entirely agree with you !
While I was working as tour guide, sometimes I have met english user.
They do not always hand in hand by grammer and they have different accent and prononcation.I
In my case, I have just began learning english, I think grammer is important either.
I'm going to take dictation about our calss and I will follow your opinion and I want to talk with you details later on
Could you push the mic a little close from the phone? or Please speak a little loud?
sometimes, I don't know whether I say exactly or not.
could you correct me on at that instant?
Thanks for today's calss !
Have a nice day !
From Jane
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [Name]!Thank you for your composition! Thank you for writing your requests as well. If you have further queries or requests, please feel free to tell me. I will be happy to help you in any way that I can. Take care and talk to you later!
T. JanE ^^
Hi~~ Jane>> Correct
Nice to meet you today!>> Correct
I entirely agree with you!>> Correct
While I was working as tour guide, sometimes I have met english user.>> While working as a tour guide, I have met people who speak English.
They do not always hand in hand by grammer and they have different accent and prononcation.I>> They don\'t know grammar very well, and they have different accent and pronunciation.
In my case, I have just began learning english, I think grammer is important either.>> In my case, I have just begun learning English, and I think grammar is important.
I\'m going to take dictation about our calss and I will follow your opinion and I want to talk with you details later on>> I\'m going to listen to our recorded class, and I will follow your opinion. I want to tell you about the details later on. Could you push the mic a little close from the phone? or Please speak a little loud?>> Could you speak closer to the mic? Please speak louder. sometimes, I don\'t know whether I say exactly or not.>> Sometimes, I don\'t know whether I say the right word or not.
could you correct me on at that instant?>> Couild you correct me right away? Thanks for today\'s class !>> Correct
Have a nice day !>> Correct From Jane
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