hi jane

2019-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi jane Long time no see I’ve been busy I decided to start class early tomorrow. PM 06:40 (after work) I will receive the cellphone from the office I’m not have a notebook when I answer your cellphone when I am at home. You can be very hard. ㅋㅋ See you tomorrow.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Ja [이름]. I am so happy to hear from you again. I was notified earlier about your class starting tomorrow. I am looking forward to talking to you. It would be fine if we will have free talking. I think we have a lot to talk about since we have not talked for a long time. kkkk~ See you tomorrow. ~teacher Jane ^____^ 



Hi jane
>>>  Hi, Jane. 

Long time no see
>>> Long time no see. 

I’ve been busy
>>> I\'ve been busy. 

I decided to start class early tomorrow. PM 06:40 (after work)
>>> I decided to start classes early tomorrow at 06:40 PM after work. 

I will receive the cellphone from the office
>>> I will take your call at the office. 

I’m not have a notebook when I answer your cellphone when I am at home.
>>> I will not have a copy of the book when I take your call at home. 

You can be very hard. ㅋㅋ
>>>  You can have a hard time. 

See you tomorrow.
>>> CORRECT =) 



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