Hi, Jane I
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi~ Jane
It's [이름]young.
I have tried to find the e-mailaddress of your company however I couldn't.
Of course there is a kind of e-mail, but it seems to be impossible to attach file.
Therefore, I think it is better to talk on the our babys' photo tommorrow during the class time.
While I tried to find the e-mail address, I searched for the website and found your photo~^^
You look more beautiful than my expectation~
Even though I have not seen you directly, it makes me feel friendly to see your photo.
Anyway~ let's talk about our e-mail problem tomorrow~
Bye~
Friendly
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]young!
I am flattered by your compliment. Thank you! You are really a friend! ^^
This is the company email address: [이메일]
You should be able to attach files like pictures.
Let's talk tomorrow! ^^
Hi~ Jane
>> Correct
>> Hi, Jane! (Better ^^)
It's [이름]young.
>> Correct
I have tried to find the e-mailaddress of your company however I couldn't.
>> Correct
>> I have tried to find the e-mail address of your company but I couldn't. (Better)
Of course there is a kind of e-mail, but it seems to be impossible to attach file.
>> There is a kind of e-mail, but it seems to be impossible to attach files.
Therefore, I think it is better to talk on the our babys' photo tommorrow during the class time.
>> Therefore, I think it is better to talk about our babies' photos tomorrow during the class.
While I tried to find the e-mail address, I searched for the website and found your photo~^^
>> Correct
You look more beautiful than my expectation~
>> You look more beautiful than I expected.
Even though I have not seen you directly, it makes me feel friendly to see your photo.
>> Even though I have not seen you directly, it makes us feel closer to see your photo.
Anyway~ let's talk about our e-mail problem tomorrow~
>> Correct
Bye~
>> Correct
Friendly
>> Your friend. ^^
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