Hi jane, this is my first homework.

2012-07-09 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Hi Jane, it was really nice to talk with you on last friday. how are you? have you spent a great weekend? It's really hot in Seoul lately. I am going to be boiled. Anyway, My korean name is Sooil Jung and I have been studying political science & diplomacy at Pusan national University for 3 years. I have worked at Kotra, an under government trade promotion corporation, as an intern. As I already told you, I would like to be a regular employee at Kotra. these are mendatory to have both english speaking ability and economic knowledges for passing the entrance exam. I am expected that you will make me cofident to speak english as well as give me some economic and business vocabularies. I am ready to study english hard! I don't actually know how to do it well. I trust you. Thank you for reading my text. See you on following monday.

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Hi there, [이름]! Thank you or your composition! It\'s a pleasure on my part to have you as my student especially that we share something in common. I wish to have interesting and interactive classes with you. Let\'s work hard together to make you an eloquent English speaker. We can do it! Take care and have a beautiful Monday! T. JanE ^^ Hi Jane, it was really nice to talk with you on last friday. >> Hi, Jane! It was really nice talking with you last Friday. How are you? >> Correct Have you spent a great weekend? >> Correct It\'s really hot in Seoul lately. >> Correct I am going to be boiled. >> Correct or >> I\'m going to be burned. Anyway, My korean name is Sooil Jung and I have been studying political science & diplomacy at Pusan national University for 3 years. >> Correct >> Anyway, my Korean name is Soo Il Jung. I am on my third grade in Pusan National University and my major os Political Scoence and Diplomacy. I have worked at Kotra, an under government trade promotion corporation, as an intern. >> Correct As I already told you, I would like to be a regular employee at Kotra. >> Correct these are mendatory to have both english speaking ability and economic knowledges for passing the entrance exam. >> English speaking ability and economic knowledge are both mandatory requirements in passing the entrance exam. I am expected that you will make me cofident to speak english as well as give me some economic and business vocabularies. >> I\'m expecting that you will make me confident in speaking English and that you will give me some economic and business vocabularies as well. I am ready to study english hard! >> Correct I don\'t actually know how to do it well. >> Correct I trust you. >> Correct Thank you for reading my text. >> Correct See you on following monday. >> See you on Monday.

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