Hi~ Jane~ What's going on?

2010-10-19 · 첨삭 강사 Monica

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi~ It's first time for you not to call me so that I have been worried whether you are sick or not. I really hope everything is O.K and you'll call me tomorrow. I look forward to hearing from you. Friendly~

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! I’m okay, don’t worry too much about me. There is a super typhoon here in our country since last night that’s why I wasn’t able to come to work. It’s not possible to go out because of the heavy rains and strong winds. I hope you understand. I will try my best to call you up tomorrow. Just pray that the weather will get better tomorrow. Take care and have a nice evening! Hi~ Jane~ What's going on?  >> correct Hi~ >> correct It's first time for you not to call me so that I have been worried whether you are sick or not. >> It’s the first time that you didn’t call me so I was worried. I thought you might be sick. I really hope everything is O.K and you'll call me tomorrow. >> correct I look forward to hearing from you. >> I am looking forward to hearing from you again. Friendly~ >> correct

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