hi janel
학생이 쓴 원문
HI~Janel
I thanks for your teaching.
Yes, It was a very hard day to me. Becasuse ther were many problem on my works, and this is not my fault, but I have to treat that. this bullyed me all the day .ㅠㅠ May be this is one of the reason why didn't I like my job.
You said looks me like tired. in true, l slept before your calling.^^; so I didn't wakwd up cleary.
I'll doing my best on next class. And I hope we take about express job continuously.
thanks a lot. Good night teacher J.M.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!^^ Thanks too for bearing with me last night.^^ Aww... What a tiring job! So that's why you don't like your job? I hope you'll have more patience there and hopefully, you'll reach your real dream job.^^ Talk to you later.
hi Janel >>>Hi janelle!! (thanks for using my real name.:)I thanks for your teaching. >>>I want to thank you for your teachings.Yes, It was a very hard day to me. Becasuse ther were many problem on my works, >>>Yes, It was a very hard day for me because there were many problems in my work. and this is not my fault, but I have to treat that. >>>The problem was not my fault, but I was the one who fixed it. this bullyed me all the day .ㅠㅠ>>>this bullied me all day .ㅠㅠ May be this is one of the reason why didn't I like my job. >>>Maybe this is one of the reasons why don't I like my job. You said looks me like tired. >>>You said I looked tired. in true, l slept before your calling.^^;>>>in truth, l slept before your called.^^; so I didn't wakwd up cleary.>>>so I didn't wake up with a clear head.I'll doing my best on next class. >>>I'll do my best on the next class. And I hope we take about express job continuously.>>>And I hope we continue to talk about my job.thanks a lot. Good night teacher J.M. >>>Correct.
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