Hi, Jasper.
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1. No, I don\'t. So, I have to appreciate it every single day of my life.
2. I think there are too numerous things. But the most important thing is not to do what people said not to do, for example smoking and drinking everyday. Additionally, harmful habits are to eat salty, sugary food; eat too fast; not enough chew foods; sleep on eating, etc.
3. I think parents are painful as their children, too worried about them to do anything. They must also be trying to nurse them and find the way to heal them by any means.
If a person cut a line, What would you do? why?
I would let the person do except for causing to lose my chance. Because my motto is to take my time and not to rush. I would also think \'Oh, he has no time\' or \'he has no chance to learn\'. Then, I would just take it without any change of my feelings.
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Hi James,
HERE ARE YOUR CORRECTIONS:
>> 1. CORRECT
2. I think there are too numerous things. But the most important thing is not to do what people said not to do, for example smoking and drinking everyday. Additionally, harmful habits are to eat salty, sugary food; eat too fast; not enough chew foods; sleep on eating, etc.
>> 2. I think there are numerous things to keep our body away from sickness but the most important thing is to follow what is the correct thing to do. For example, do not smoke and drink everyday. Additionally, avoid eating salty or sugary food. Do not eat too fast and chew your food properly.
3. I think parents are painful as their children, too worried about them to do anything. They must also be trying to nurse them and find the way to heal them by any means.
>> 3. I think the parents would [이름]t to feel the pain of their children. They will be trying to nurse them and will find a way to help their children by any means.
If a person cut a line, What would you do? why?
I would let the person do except for causing to lose my chance. Because my motto is to take my time and not to rush.
>> This sentence is confusing. It means, you would let the person cut the line but you won\'t because you might lose your chance. Is this what you meant?
I would let the person go even if I will lose my chance because my motto is to take my time and not to rush.
I would let the person go even if I will lose my chance because my motto is to take my time and not to rush.
I would also think \'Oh, he has no time\' or \'he has no chance to learn\'.
>> I would think that maybe the person has no time and he is rushing.
Then, I would just take it without any change of my feelings.
>> I would let it go without hard feelings.
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