Hi, Jasper.
학생이 쓴 원문
I answer the questions on page 9 and your question.
1. I think that a better form of communication is calling through the phone.
I don\'t know if I\'m getting old. I hardly use texting. Because I [이름]t to listen to any answer immediately and I\'m not sure in texting how the other side think in detail when I suggest. So sometimes, it makes me not response accordingly. So I prefer to call.
2. I hardly send text message. Occasionally, I will text if I need to give only some information.
3. No, I don\'t. I\'ve never sent a letter since I was in military.
Do you have a sleeping pattern?
Yes, I do. I\'m trying to get up before 8 a.m, stick to the rules of sleeping for at least 7 hours and not eating some food 2 hours before lying on my bed. I draw curtains to block the light. I turn my head to the right side.
And Could you tell me why?
I don\'t know what my talent is.
>>I don\'t know what my talent is for.
- I don\'t understand what\'s different between \'what my talent is\' and \'what my talent is for\'.
강사 첨삭
Hi James, you are too advanced in the textbook. I suggest, try to understand one article at a time.
1. I think that a better form of communication is calling through the phone.
I don\'t know if I\'m getting old.
2. I hardly send text message.
And Could you tell me why?
I don\'t know what my talent is.
>>I don\'t know what my talent is for.
- I don\'t understand what\'s different between \'what my talent is\' and \'what my talent is for\'.
Here are your corrections:
I answer the questions on page 9 and your question.
I answer the questions on page 9 and your question.
>> I answered the questions on page 9 and your question.
>> 1. I think, calling through phone is a better form of communication than texting.
>> CORRECT
I hardly use texting. Because I [이름]t to listen to any answer immediately and I\'m not sure in texting how the other side think in detail when I suggest.
>> I hardly use texting because I [이름]t to listen to the answer immediately and in texting I\'m not sure what the other person is thinking in detail when I suggest.
So sometimes, it makes me not response accordingly.
>> This is why sometimes, I don\'t respond accordingly.
So I prefer to call.
>>So, I prefer a call.
>> 2. I hardly send a text message.
Occasionally, I will text if I need to give only some information.
>> I will use text if I need to give information.
3. No, I don\'t.
>> 3. CORRECT
I\'ve never sent a letter since I was in military.
>> ..in THE military.
Do you have a sleeping pattern?
Yes, I do.
Yes, I do.
>> CORRECT
I\'m trying to get up before 8 a.m, stick to the rules of sleeping for at least 7 hours and not eating some food 2 hours before lying on my bed.
>> I\'m trying to get up before 8 a.an so I\'m also trying to stick to the rule of sleeping for at least 7 hours and not eating food 2 hours before laying on my bed. (SORRY, I used the word LYING from your previous homework. It should be LAYING.)
I draw curtains to block the light. I turn my head to the right side.
>> I draw the curtains to block the light and turn my head to the right.
And Could you tell me why?
I don\'t know what my talent is.
>>I don\'t know what my talent is for.
- I don\'t understand what\'s different between \'what my talent is\' and \'what my talent is for\'.
I don\'t know what my talent is for. (It means the purpose of your talent. Example: Dancing for my sister.)
I don\'t know what my talent is. (It means your talent. Example: Dancing, Singing)
I don\'t know what my talent is. (It means your talent. Example: Dancing, Singing)
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