Hi jean !

2019-05-03 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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[ESSAY] In 3-5 sentences, answer the question below: >> Are you a risk taker? Why/why not? I think i am not a risk taker. Although I heard a sentence \"high risk, high return\" that makes people expect better results(high return), rather i heard that sentence, i feel dangerous because of the hidden meaning. The hidden meaning that i thought is the opposite situation. whenever i try risky things, i feel dangerous because it would be worse. That\'s why i am not a risk taker.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

 


Thank you for sending your homework.


 


Cheers!

Jean



[ESSAY]
In 3-5 sentences, answer the question below:

>> Are you a risk taker? Why/why not?

I think i am not a risk taker.

>> or: I must say that I\'m not a risk taker.

 Although I heard a sentence \"high risk, high return\" that makes people expect better results(high return), rather i heard that sentence, i feel dangerous because of the hidden meaning.
>> Although I\'ve heard of the phrase \"high risk, high return\" that makes people expect better results (high return), I still could feel the dangers lurking behind such known theory.

 The hidden meaning that i thought is the opposite situation.
>> I believe that the opposite of \'high return\' is a more likely possibility. 


 whenever i try risky things, i feel dangerous because it would be worse.
>> Whenever I try risky things, I would always fear the possibility of failing.


 That\'s why i am not a risk taker.

>> or: This is the reason why I\'m not a risk taker.


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