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Jean
[ESSAY]
In 3-5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> Are you a risk taker? Why/why not?
I think i am not a risk taker.
>> or: I must say that I\'m not a risk taker.
Although I heard a sentence \"high risk, high return\" that makes people expect better results(high return), rather i heard that sentence, i feel dangerous because of the hidden meaning.
>> Although I\'ve heard of the phrase \"high risk, high return\" that makes people expect better results (high return), I still could feel the dangers lurking behind such known theory.
The hidden meaning that i thought is the opposite situation.
>> I believe that the opposite of \'high return\' is a more likely possibility.
whenever i try risky things, i feel dangerous because it would be worse.
>> Whenever I try risky things, I would always fear the possibility of failing.
That\'s why i am not a risk taker.
>> or: This is the reason why I\'m not a risk taker.
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