Hi! Jennifer♥
학생이 쓴 원문
I'm happy to meet you today! I was so nervous untill you calls meT.T
But! because you taught me kindly, I restored my confidence. Thank you♥ I want to tell you what i think about everything, but i couldn't tell you what i think.. but as time goes on I wii tell you what i want to speak. I was enjoyed that our conversation! i was surprised that you spoke good korean and very knew korea culture!♥ anyway, I want to make a good friend with you! again, Thank you for your kindness. Have a good time! See you tomorrow!
강사 첨삭
[이름],
I am so glad to see what you wrote in here. I enjoyed our conversation today as well. Last time, during the level test, you sounded really cheerful and friendly so I still can remember you. I also hope to have great and productive classes with you especially in the coming days. If there is anything that I could help you out with, please don’t hesitate to tell me and I will try to help you to the best of my abilities. I am sure you will be an enthusiastic student! I can’t wait to talk with you again tomorrow! Be safe always! ^^
XOXO, Jenny
I'm happy to meet you today!
>>Correct.
I was so nervous untill you calls me.
>> I was so nervous until you called me.
But! because you taught me kindly, I restored my confidence.
>> Because you taught me kindly, I was able to restore my confidence.
Thank you♥
>>Correct.
I want to tell you what i think about everything, but i couldn't tell you what i think.
>> I wanted to tell you everything on my mind but I was not able to tell you.
but as time goes on I wii tell you what i want to speak.
>>As time goes by, I will be able to tell you what I wanted to say.
I was enjoyed that our conversation! i was surprised that you spoke good korean and very knew korea culture!♥
>>I enjoyed our conversation and I was surprise that you can speak good in Korean and how much you know about the Korean culture.
anyway, I want to make a good friend with you!
>>Anyway, I want to make good friends with you!
again, Thank you for your kindness.
>>Again, thank you for your kindness,
Have a good time! See you tomorrow!
>>Correct.
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