Hi, Jeny
학생이 쓴 원문
morning
1. I have a girlfriend until few days ago. she suddenly changed haert.
I clung her but, she said \"I don\'t like you anymore\"
It\'s wound for me.
I got a coin from kidzone when i dig sand
Thank you. happy Tuesday !
강사 첨삭
Happy Tuesday Jon!
Keep on making sentences for you to enhance your skills. Are your sentences true? Is it your real story? Hang on there and just be strong. Challenges in life could make you a better person.
Have a great day!
Hi, Jeny
morning
>>Correct
1. I have a girlfriend until few days ago. she suddenly changed heart.
>>Correct
1. I have a girlfriend until few days ago. she suddenly changed heart.
>>I had a girlfriend until a few days ago. She suddenly changed her heart.
I clung her but, she said \"I don\'t like you anymore\"
I clung her but, she said \"I don\'t like you anymore\"
>>I clung to her, but she said, \"I don\'t like you anymore.\"
It\'s wound for me.
>>It broke my heart
It\'s wound for me.
>>It broke my heart
OR>>It was painful.
I got a coin from kidzone when i dig sand
>>I got a coin from Kidzone when I dug sand.
Thank you. happy Tuesday !
I got a coin from kidzone when i dig sand
>>I got a coin from Kidzone when I dug sand.
Thank you. happy Tuesday !
>>Correct
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