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2016-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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(This is continued with last writing!) I understood the sentence of that means “The fact gives stress to other people – that fact is that there are things that I have to do”, and in fact, that is what I intended... :) However, maybe my poor writing skill makes misunderstand to you...:( Oh and Jeny, I want to change my class book! The POWER ENGLISH website has updated, and now I can look at other books. After see few of books, I think the book series 'Free Talking' is better to me. How about your opinion, Jeny? :) (And continued with writing about gassip) If we have concentrated at our life and living, there is no enegy to say or listen gassip, even if we are still lonely. All of people want to solve their loneliness, but the method of that is very different. Using gassiping with the method of solving their loneliness is not good for themselves. Instead, focusing ourselves and loving our life is the most benefit method, I think.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sarah,
Time is flying so fast like a blink of an eye.
You\'ve done a great job!I have to say, each passing day that we\'re having classes there are some changes in you. It may not lead you right away to the perfection and mastery of the language but at least you\'re getting there step by step! Never give up and just keep yourself motivated!

Take care!!!
T. Jeny

 

(This is continued with last writing!)

>>This is  the continuation.
I understood the sentence of that means “The fact gives stress to other people – that fact is that there are things that I have to do”, and in fact, that is what I intended... :)

>>I understood the meaning of the sentence, \"The fact gives stress to other people; that fact is that there are things that I have to do”, and in fact, that is what I intended... :)
However, maybe my poor writing skill makes misunderstand to you...:(
>>However, maybe my poor writing skill made you misunderstood me.
Oh and Jeny, I want to change my class book!

>>Oh and Jeny, I want to change my book in our class !
The POWER ENGLISH website has updated, and now I can look at other books.

>>The POWER ENGLISH website was updated, and now I can check other books.
After see few of books, I think the book series \'Free Talking\' is better to me. How about your opinion, Jeny? :)
>>After I saw a few books, I think the book series \'Free Talking\' is better for me. How about your opinion, Jeny? :)
(And continued with writing about gassip)

>>(I will continue with writing about gossip)
If we have concentrated at our life and living, there is no enegy to say or listen gassip, even if we are still lonely.

>>If we have to concentrate on our life and on how we live it, we will not have the energy to talk or listen to gossips, even if we are lonely.
All of people want to solve their loneliness, but the method of that is very different.

>>All of the poeple want to solve their loneliness, but the method for that is very different.

Using gassiping with the method of solving their loneliness is not good for themselves.

>>Using gossip as a method of solving their loneliness won\'t be good for them.
Instead, focusing ourselves and loving our life is the most benefit method, I think.

>>Instead, focusing to ourselves and loving our lives are the most beneficial method, I think.

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