hi jeny!!!

2016-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Hi Jeny! Two month ago, I didn’t write my homework three times, so I can write to you three times more in this month! I still couldn’t understand about our first homework, and I think you also couldn’t understand what I am saying :) haha lol On the sentence, “The fact that there are things that I do which give stress to other people.”, you said to me on new feedback, the SUBJECT ‘things’ is matched with the VERB ‘give’.. is it right? However, the SUBJECT ‘things’ also has another VERB ‘are’ infront of it.. isn’t it? Then, where is the VERB which is matched with the SUBJECT ‘the fact’? This doesn’t need a VERB? I thought that “The fact that there are things that I do which give stress to other people” -> I color the words which are matched the SUBJECT and VERB. That is because I thought ‘give’ must be correct to ‘gives’! (I have no enought space to write, so I will continue next writing!)

강사 첨삭

Hello Sarah!!!

I guess, it was my mistake...I didn\'t understand your first sentence....I got it and it should be gives. Thanks a lot!!!

Have a great time!!!

T. Jeny

 

Hi Jeny! Two month ago, I didn’t write my homework three times, so I can write to you three times more in this month!

>>Hi Jeny! Two months ago, I didn\'t do my homework, so I can send you more than three times this month.
I still couldn’t understand about our first homework, and I think you also couldn’t understand what I am saying :) haha lol

>>I still couldn’t understand our first homework, and I think you also couldn’t understand what I am saying :) haha lol
On the sentence, “The fact that there are things that I do which give stress to other people.”, you said to me on new feedback, the SUBJECT ‘things’ is matched with the VERB ‘give’.. is it right?

>>correct
However, the SUBJECT ‘things’ also has another VERB ‘are’ in front of it.. isn’t it?

>>correct
Then, where is the VERB which is matched with the SUBJECT ‘the fact’? This doesn’t need a VERB?

>>correct ( The fact is not the subject on you first sentence)
I thought that “The fact that there are things that I do which give stress to other people” -> I color the words which are matched the SUBJECT and VERB.

>>I thought that “The fact that there are things that I do which give stress to other people” -> I color the words which are matched the SUBJECT and VERB.
That is because I thought ‘give’ must be correct to ‘gives’!\\

>>correct ( Now, I can understand what you want to say...yes it should be gives...thank you)
I have no enought space to write, so I will continue next writing!)

>>(I don\'t have enough space to write on, so I will continue on the page!)

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