hi Jeny.. :)
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Hello Sarah!!!
I didn\'t notice that your voice was low...heheheh so I need to listen to the recording as well. heheheh
I hope you can s[이름]p well!!!
Take care and see you later!!!
T. Jeny
Hi Jeny!
>>correct
I just listen a record of our last class right now, and I realize that my voice was not clear at that time.
>>I just finished listening to our last class\' recording and I realized that my voice wasn\'t clear.
I bought new earphone last week, so I used the new earphone at the last class.
>>I bought a new earphone last week, so I used the new earphone on our last class.
I didn\'t know that the earphone has low-function of microphone.
>>I didn\'t know that the earphone\'s microphone was in it\'s low volume.
I am so sorry for that... I think you was annoyed at bad quality of my voice. :(
>>I am so sorry for that... I think you were annoyed with the bad quality of my voice.
Tomorrow (actually it is today because it is 2a.m!) I would change my earphone again, and then maybe the quality of my voice will be better.
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Though I would go to bed late today, I wish that I can wake early than our class...:)
>>Though I would go to bed late today. I wish, I can wake up early before our class.
Bye Bye~
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