Hi Jesica!

2011-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Jessica

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Hi^-^ I'm [이름]. Today we have a class but yesterday night, I booked a movie tiket that start time is 8:00 p.m today. So I take off our class and I want to say " Sorry, I didn't tell u on a phone " Today, Korea whether is great! Warm and shiny! I hope you have a nice time on this Korea Happy New Year. I guess you are little bit tired cause every busy class shudjule. I will have a "Dduck-guk" that korea traditional food in new yaer. I love this food so much. Anyway, Jesica~ I miss you surely. See u next week on monday. byebye!!

강사 첨삭

Hello there!         Thank you so much  for informing me. I will surely miss you too.I'm looking forward to have class with you again on Monday! Be safe and enjoy the rest of your days! Happy New year! - Jessica-   Hi^-^ >>CorrectI'm [이름].  >>Correct Today we have a class but yesterday night, I booked a movie tiket that start time is 8:00 p.m today.  >>Tonight, we are supposed to have a class but I booked a movie ticket that will start at 8 pm. So I take off our class and I want to say " Sorry, I didn't tell u on a phone " >>So, I delayed our class and I want to say " Sorry, I didn't tell you on the phone ".Today, Korea whether is great! Warm and shiny! >> Today the weather in Korea is great. It is warm and shinny.I hope you have a nice time on this Korea Happy New Year. >>I hope you will have a nice time this Korean New Year.  I guess you are little bit tired cause every busy class shudjule.  >> I guess you are a little bit tired because everyday you have a  busy class schedule. I will have a "Dduck-guk" that korea traditional food in new yaer. >>I will have a Korean traditional food called "Dduck-guk" this New Year.I love this food so much. >>CorrectAnyway, Jesica~ I miss you surely. >>Anyway, Jessica I'll surely miss you.See u next week on Monday. Byebye!! >>Correct

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