Hi Jesica!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi^-^
I'm [이름]. Today we have a class but yesterday night, I booked a movie tiket that start time is 8:00 p.m today. So I take off our class and I want to say " Sorry, I didn't tell u on a phone "
Today, Korea whether is great! Warm and shiny!
I hope you have a nice time on this Korea Happy New Year. I guess you are little bit tired cause every busy class shudjule.
I will have a "Dduck-guk" that korea traditional food in new yaer.
I love this food so much.
Anyway, Jesica~ I miss you surely.
See u next week on monday. byebye!!
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Thank you so much for informing me. I will surely miss you too.I'm looking forward to have class with you again on Monday!
Be safe and enjoy the rest of your days! Happy New year!
- Jessica-
Hi^-^
>>CorrectI'm [이름].
>>Correct
Today we have a class but yesterday night, I booked a movie tiket that start time is 8:00 p.m today.
>>Tonight, we are supposed to have a class but I booked a movie ticket that will start at 8 pm.
So I take off our class and I want to say " Sorry, I didn't tell u on a phone "
>>So, I delayed our class and I want to say " Sorry, I didn't tell you on the phone ".Today, Korea whether is great! Warm and shiny!
>> Today the weather in Korea is great. It is warm and shinny.I hope you have a nice time on this Korea Happy New Year.
>>I hope you will have a nice time this Korean New Year.
I guess you are little bit tired cause every busy class shudjule.
>> I guess you are a little bit tired because everyday you have a busy class schedule. I will have a "Dduck-guk" that korea traditional food in new yaer.
>>I will have a Korean traditional food called "Dduck-guk" this New Year.I love this food so much.
>>CorrectAnyway, Jesica~ I miss you surely.
>>Anyway, Jessica I'll surely miss you.See u next week on Monday. Byebye!!
>>Correct
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