hi! JESICA

2011-08-13 · 첨삭 강사 Jessica

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello. it's been a long time. yesterday, I didnt tell you I can't have a class with you. suddenly, my boss he wanted to go to Chinise restorant with all of team member. so I asked postpone our class to the Power English manager. todayㅠㅠ(=> Do you know this charactor meaning? that's I'm so sad.) also my boyfreind he booked a movie tiket at 7:40 P.M. if a movie not finished untill 9:10 P.M, I can't not take your calls. Don't surprise ! I love you !! Pleas forgive me ㅠㅠ have a nice Friday night!

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름] must enjoy the rest of your days  especially that we are going to have a long vacation. Just take care and have a great weekend, [이름]!I뭠l see you on Tuesday, nextweek. I love you too, my dear [이름]!   it's been a long time. >>>It's been a long time. >>>It's been awhile. yesterday, I didnt tell you I can't have a class with you. >>>Yesterday, I wasn't able to tell you that I couldn't take the class with you. suddenly, my boss he wanted to go to Chinise restorant with all of team member. so I asked postpone our class to the Power English manager. >>>My boss suddenly wanted  to eat out in the Chinese restaurant with all of our team members so I called the manager of Power English to postpone my class. todayㅠㅠ(=> Do you know this charactor meaning? that's I'm so sad.) >>>ㅠㅠ(=> Do you know the meaning of this character? That means I'm so sad.) also my boyfreind he booked a movie tiket at 7:40 P.M. >>>Also my boyfriend booked a movie ticket at 7:40 p.m. if a movie not finished untill 9:10 P.M, I can't not take your calls. >>>If the movie will not be finished until 9:10 p.m,I cannot take your calls. Don't surprise ! >>>Don't be surprised!:) I love you !! >>>correct sentence Pleas forgive me ㅠㅠ >>>correct sentence have a nice Friday night! >>>Have a nice Friday night!TGIF!

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