hi! JESICA
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello.
it's been a long time.
yesterday, I didnt tell you I can't have a class with you.
suddenly, my boss he wanted to go to Chinise restorant with all of team member. so I asked postpone our class to the Power English manager.
todayㅠㅠ(=> Do you know this charactor meaning? that's I'm so sad.)
also my boyfreind he booked a movie tiket at 7:40 P.M.
if a movie not finished untill 9:10 P.M, I can't not take your calls.
Don't surprise !
I love you !!
Pleas forgive me ㅠㅠ
have a nice Friday night!
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름] must enjoy the rest of your days especially that we are going to have a long vacation. Just take care and have a great weekend, [이름]!I뭠l see you on Tuesday, nextweek. I love you too, my dear [이름]!
it's been a long time.
>>>It's been a long time.
>>>It's been awhile.
yesterday, I didnt tell you I can't have a class with you.
>>>Yesterday, I wasn't able to tell you that I couldn't take the class with you.
suddenly, my boss he wanted to go to Chinise restorant with all of team member. so I asked postpone our class to the Power English manager.
>>>My boss suddenly wanted to eat out in the Chinese restaurant with all of our team members so I called the manager of Power English to postpone my class.
todayㅠㅠ(=> Do you know this charactor meaning? that's I'm so sad.)
>>>ㅠㅠ(=> Do you know the meaning of this character? That means I'm so sad.)
also my boyfreind he booked a movie tiket at 7:40 P.M.
>>>Also my boyfriend booked a movie ticket at 7:40 p.m.
if a movie not finished untill 9:10 P.M, I can't not take your calls.
>>>If the movie will not be finished until 9:10 p.m,I cannot take your calls.
Don't surprise !
>>>Don't be surprised!:)
I love you !!
>>>correct sentence
Pleas forgive me ㅠㅠ
>>>correct sentence
have a nice Friday night!
>>>Have a nice Friday night!TGIF!
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