^^Hi Jessica~~~
학생이 쓴 원문
When did you gave me a lot of homework, I felt interesting.
I said "Are you angry?". It just jok^^
I am with you in what you gave me a lot of homework for my improvement.
I thought my homework for a long time.
I think abortion should be illegal.
Because life is very importance.
I am afraid people are downplayd the life.
But I think this case is acceptable.
Forexample, be sexually assaulted.
I thought homework for a long time but I can't tell you.
Maybe my mouse is not mind. hahaha!!
I want more spend to study English but I concerntrated my thesis continue.
Your advice is always help me.
I will try read the BBC newspaper soon^^* !!
Thank~~~*
강사 첨삭
Hi, Mi [이름]!....Thank you for reading my advices about honing your Englsih skills.Also, I really appreciate you for making your homework even if how hectic your schedule is. See you!
When did you gave me a lot of homework, I felt interesting.
>>>When you give me a lot of homeworks, I feel so excited.I said "Are you angry?". It just jok^^
>>>I was joking when I asked you if you are angry.I am with you in what you gave me a lot of homework for my improvement.
>>>I agree with you that giving a lot of homework helps me to hone my skills.I thought my homework for a long time.
>>>I thought about my homework for a long time.I think abortion should be illegal.
>>>I think, abortion should be illegal.Because life is very importance.
>>>Because life is very important.I am afraid people are downplayd the life.
>>>I am afraid that people are downplaying life.
But I think this case is acceptable.
>>>correct sentenceForexample, be sexually assaulted.
>>>For example, be sexually assualted.I thought homework for a long time but I can't tell you.
>>>I thought about my homework for a long time but I don't have enough time to tell you.Maybe my mouse is not mind. hahaha!!
>>>Maybe, I cant think well. Hahahahaha!(Is this what you mean?)I want more spend to study English but I concerntrated my thesis continue.
>>>>I want to spend more time in studying English but I need to concentrate I making my thesis.Your advice is always help me.
>>>Your advices always help me.I will try read the BBC newspaper soon^^* !!
>>>correct sentenceThank~~~*
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