^^Hi Jessica~~~

2010-12-07 · 첨삭 강사 Ella

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When did you gave me a lot of homework, I felt interesting. I said "Are you angry?". It just jok^^ I am with you in what you gave me a lot of homework for my improvement. I thought my homework for a long time. I think abortion should be illegal. Because life is very importance. I am afraid people are downplayd the life. But I think this case is acceptable. Forexample, be sexually assaulted. I thought homework for a long time but I can't tell you. Maybe my mouse is not mind. hahaha!! I want more spend to study English but I concerntrated my thesis continue. Your advice is always help me. I will try read the BBC newspaper soon^^* !! Thank~~~*

강사 첨삭

Hi, Mi [이름]!....Thank you for reading my advices about honing your Englsih skills.Also, I really appreciate you for making your homework even if how hectic your schedule is. See you! When did you gave me a lot of homework, I felt interesting. >>>When you give me a lot of homeworks, I feel so excited.I said "Are you angry?". It just jok^^ >>>I was joking when I asked you if you are angry.I am with you in what you gave me a lot of homework for my improvement. >>>I agree with you that giving a lot of homework helps me to hone my skills.I thought my homework for a long time. >>>I thought about my homework for a long time.I think abortion should be illegal. >>>I think, abortion should be illegal.Because life is very importance. >>>Because life is very important.I am afraid people are downplayd the life. >>>I am afraid that people are downplaying life. But I think this case is acceptable. >>>correct sentenceForexample, be sexually assaulted. >>>For example, be sexually assualted.I thought homework for a long time but I can't tell you. >>>I thought about my homework for a long time but I don't have enough time to tell you.Maybe my mouse is not mind. hahaha!! >>>Maybe, I cant think well. Hahahahaha!(Is this what you mean?)I want more spend to study English but I concerntrated my thesis continue. >>>>I want to spend more time in studying English but I need to concentrate I making my thesis.Your advice is always help me. >>>Your advices always help me.I will try read the BBC newspaper soon^^* !! >>>correct sentenceThank~~~*  

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