Hi,Jessie! Check my homework.please.^^

2014-08-31 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hi,Jessie! I'm sorry that I submmit my wednesday homework lately. Please check my homework!. Q: Write about the most embarrassing thing that you have done or the most embarrassing experience you've had. A: When I went to work In this morning at the subway,I was seating and reading a book. Then, I saw a pregnant women who was standing. So,I tried to give up my seat for her. However,She refused my favorite. I couldn't understand her behavior. I really was embarrassing.

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Hello there!

Thanks for having the time to answer your homework.

Don\'t worry sir. I understand that you are also busy.

So even if its late, I\'m still grateful.^^,

Anyway, please go over the corrections I made in your composition.

Have a good night!

~T. Jessie~
Hi,Jessie!

>> Correct!

OR>> Hi Jessie!
I\'m sorry that I submmit my wednesday homework lately.

>> I\'m sorry that I submitted my Wednesday homework late.
Please check my homework!.
>> Correct!
Q: Write about the most embarrassing thing that you have done or the most embarrassing experience you\'ve had.
A: When I went to work In this morning at the subway,I was seating and reading a book.

>> When I went to work this morning on the subway, I was sitting and reading a book.
Then, I saw a pregnant women who was standing.

>> Correct!
So,I tried to give up my seat for her.

>> Correct!

However,She refused my favorite.

>> However, she refused my offer.
I couldn\'t understand her behavior.

>> Correct!

I really was embarrassing.

>> That was really embarrassing.

OR>> I was really embarrassed.

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